(Half-)Rodenian Thread
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Ooooooooh fuuuuuck me that's a blast from the past.... they don't make game shows like they used to.
So was mine, if they should happen to be reading. Having fans eager to read is motivating, but also kinda scary at the same time. =P
A bit of silly idea here but a scene where the player wakes up in the middle of the night to a noise in the kitchen. Upon entering turning on the lights and seeing some opened bags of chips as a pair of rodent ears pop up from behind the counter. "Sorry was craving a midnight snack" Keilin says. Great a rat in the kitchen just what I needed.
Might also be a fun Pregnancy craving scene if you get around to that content.
Might also be a fun Pregnancy craving scene if you get around to that content.
I still can get over the fact these mfs have sex with their ears, gestate with their breasts and give birth through their nipples
We really need some Rodenian preg content to esperience this first hand
Don't forget, they lay EGGS through their breasts.
Ah, forgot the most important part of the whole process: they're an oviparous species
I sometimes wonder what was Will cooking with the rat bois and gals
Hey, never said it was bad cooking or that he burnt the kitchen, just that it was... well, truly original, if there's a way to put it
Even though it's way to early for something like this in Keilin's case, it'd be interesting to (one day) see a Rodenian get actual preg content, still. If not because it's something someone in these forums will lose gallons to, just for the sheer absurdity of the whole ordeal (which goes well to some of the sheer bs that you're able to see and experience in the game already, no kink shaming or anything tho)
Even though it's way to early for something like this in Keilin's case, it'd be interesting to (one day) see a Rodenian get actual preg content, still. If not because it's something someone in these forums will lose gallons to, just for the sheer absurdity of the whole ordeal (which goes well to some of the sheer bs that you're able to see and experience in the game already, no kink shaming or anything tho)
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I'm pretty sure Fenoxo was responsible for rodenians as a whole, William just wrote the most prominent ones.
Right, back to working on this, and I just had to take a moment to say this thing is probably gonna be a shitshow in early testing. I'm trying to do a lot more with parser tags now to spice up the writing and keep it less samey all the way through.
But if my yinglet TF showed me anything it's that I don't always envision the output of a tag correctly. At the very least though, I now understand how capitalization works through parser tags.
Anyway, back to the word mines. So much much more left to do.
But if my yinglet TF showed me anything it's that I don't always envision the output of a tag correctly. At the very least though, I now understand how capitalization works through parser tags.
Anyway, back to the word mines. So much much more left to do.
First sex scene, ear sex, is mostly written. Working on cunnilingus scene right now. Mind you, both these scenes will need various variations for body types.
(Come to think of it, cunnilingus with a taur may require a pretty large rewrite. If she's eating you out, how could you reach down to her ears?)
In any event, progress continues and this is likely not all I will write today.
Instead, I realize now that her eye color needs to change. Apparently, standard eye colors for rodenians are red, blue and green. (Possibly purple but those rodenians may be modded. It's a common color, but not mentioned in the codex.) So, I need to change her eye color from brown during the first editing pass.
If people have strong opinions on eye color lemme know.
(Come to think of it, cunnilingus with a taur may require a pretty large rewrite. If she's eating you out, how could you reach down to her ears?)
In any event, progress continues and this is likely not all I will write today.
Instead, I realize now that her eye color needs to change. Apparently, standard eye colors for rodenians are red, blue and green. (Possibly purple but those rodenians may be modded. It's a common color, but not mentioned in the codex.) So, I need to change her eye color from brown during the first editing pass.
If people have strong opinions on eye color lemme know.
Probably either make a completely taur-centric variation of the scene (too much work) or just lock taur Steeles out of eating rat ear-cooch (boo, boring)
Still working on this. Had to beat my brain a bit to get working. There's a lot of variations to be put into these first three sex scenes, because I wanna do it right. If/when Keilin is expanded in the future, I will be more picky, but I want ANY Steele to be able to have sex with Keilin and have it make sense. For example, here's a list of things I am trying to take into account for just an ear fuck scene:
Ear Fuck Variants Needed:
Taur
Has Vagina (added to basic or taur)
Has Tail cock (added to basic, taur or Naga)
Has Tailpussy (added to basic taur or Naga)
Multi-Cock
Multi-Tailcock
Multi-Tailpussy
Naga
Lactation (Foreplay?)
Red Myr Venom
Knot?
Flare?
Cum ejaculation quantity of 1000 mLs or more
Cum ejaculation quantity of 3000 mLs or more
Hardlight Strapon
Aphrodisiac Bodyparts
PC's Clothing or Nudity
As you can see it comes off a bit overwhelming, so I am trying my best to chip away at it. Also, the link to the document has changed, which is actually the main reason I am posting this. It's not professionally formatted yet but I am moving in that direction.
Also learning a lot about how to plan to add things in the future for other possible submissions. This one is a mess, but I imagine anyone's first whack at a complicated submission is.
Anyway, linky:
docs.google.com
Ear Fuck Variants Needed:
Taur
Has Vagina (added to basic or taur)
Has Tail cock (added to basic, taur or Naga)
Has Tailpussy (added to basic taur or Naga)
Multi-Cock
Multi-Tailcock
Multi-Tailpussy
Naga
Lactation (Foreplay?)
Red Myr Venom
Knot?
Flare?
Cum ejaculation quantity of 1000 mLs or more
Cum ejaculation quantity of 3000 mLs or more
Hardlight Strapon
Aphrodisiac Bodyparts
PC's Clothing or Nudity
As you can see it comes off a bit overwhelming, so I am trying my best to chip away at it. Also, the link to the document has changed, which is actually the main reason I am posting this. It's not professionally formatted yet but I am moving in that direction.
Also learning a lot about how to plan to add things in the future for other possible submissions. This one is a mess, but I imagine anyone's first whack at a complicated submission is.
Anyway, linky:
Jarylan's TiTS Submission 4: Keilin, A Rodenian Crewmate
Submission Proposal: Keilin, A Rodenian Crewmate Table of Contents: Foreword Foreword: [Put why the fuck you thought Keilin was a good idea here.] Overview Quest becomes available once Steele is level 8. At that point, a new path unlocks on Uveto revealing a small area. Exploring this area, ...
Man, logic and sex scenes got hands...
Apologies for the long absence, I've been struggling a lot as of late when it comes to writing. Which isn't to say I haven't made progress, just to say that I haven't made anywhere near as much as I'd like. Part of this is just on me and my inability to focus, no matter how much I would like to.
However, there have also been some painful learning experiences. Among them, the difficulty of logical notation, and how it can quickly turn an easily readable scene into a slog to try and understand. I think I realize now why most writers do a variety of narrow sex scenes, rather than large over arching scenes which take into account many possible factors.
Which brings me to a request: I would like for folks to read through the first time sex scenes as they currently stand and give me you opinion on them. And if you find you can't really understand them due to all the logic notation, tell me that too. Or if the notation is bad. Or anything you find really.
Because I find myself wondering if I should scrap those scenes, and start again with a greater number of more simple scenes, which take fewer variables into account. They would increase the word count, yet lower the difficulty of writing, and may be easier and more fun to read. Or, if those scenes are something folks like, I will keep and polish them as special first times with Keilin. Future scenes however, will be more focused, to help my sanity.
So, tl;dr, read the sex scenes currently in there and give me some feedback.
Other than that, I think I need better organization of what's left to write up. So, here's a to-do list mostly for my own reference.
Finish Bedtime Scenes
Create Morning Scenes
Add conversation about Psychics
Repeatable sex scenes
Oh, and one last thing: don't write a sexy scene of someone stripping Steele of their clothing. Once you realize how many possible combinations of things the PC may (or may not) be wearing, you'll want to tear your hair out.
Apologies for the long absence, I've been struggling a lot as of late when it comes to writing. Which isn't to say I haven't made progress, just to say that I haven't made anywhere near as much as I'd like. Part of this is just on me and my inability to focus, no matter how much I would like to.
However, there have also been some painful learning experiences. Among them, the difficulty of logical notation, and how it can quickly turn an easily readable scene into a slog to try and understand. I think I realize now why most writers do a variety of narrow sex scenes, rather than large over arching scenes which take into account many possible factors.
Which brings me to a request: I would like for folks to read through the first time sex scenes as they currently stand and give me you opinion on them. And if you find you can't really understand them due to all the logic notation, tell me that too. Or if the notation is bad. Or anything you find really.
Because I find myself wondering if I should scrap those scenes, and start again with a greater number of more simple scenes, which take fewer variables into account. They would increase the word count, yet lower the difficulty of writing, and may be easier and more fun to read. Or, if those scenes are something folks like, I will keep and polish them as special first times with Keilin. Future scenes however, will be more focused, to help my sanity.
So, tl;dr, read the sex scenes currently in there and give me some feedback.
Other than that, I think I need better organization of what's left to write up. So, here's a to-do list mostly for my own reference.
Finish Bedtime Scenes
Create Morning Scenes
Add conversation about Psychics
Repeatable sex scenes
Oh, and one last thing: don't write a sexy scene of someone stripping Steele of their clothing. Once you realize how many possible combinations of things the PC may (or may not) be wearing, you'll want to tear your hair out.
Welp, I just got done reading the scenes and I just gotta say, keep it up! I really like them, and honestly from my (maybe naïve) perspective, these are more than good enough to be in the game already (not that they're just first drafts or that quality was ever a part of the question, but just suffice it to say I think they're great). I'm really glad to see good work on another crewmate, and especially both a Rodenian (a race we don't have too too much content for and one which I recently rediscovered in a new playthrough once I got to Zheng Shi) and a more loving relationship (Penny and Paige being two of my favorite crewMates we've got already).
I can't tell you much about the notation itself if you wanted feedback on syntax or anything, but as far as readability it wasn't all that hard to understand after I had seen a couple paragraphs of it, especially the parsers that appeared in the same setup multiple times like the conditions for whether the pc has a normal or tail based dick. Just kind of picked a descriptor and ran with it, generally.
I do think that the idea of using them as specifically first-time scenes and then expanding via smaller scenes is the way to go, definitely something that we see with plenty of other npcs in the game, and so long as the workload doesn't get too heavy it seems like the best way to mitigate work lost and keep going forward.
There are of course general copy-edit duties to be carried out, as they'll escape the even most scrutinous editorial process (If you've even had the time to edit much at all), but those will be easy to fix (I noticed the doc was on suggestion mode, I didn't want to go marking up the document with a whole bunch of comments but if you like I can go back through and make them for you to review at your leisure).
P.S. It occurs to me you might have wanted this feedback in a dm, but I'm new to the forums and don't know how to do that, nor if that's case in the first place. I guess worst comes to worst I can move it later.