Requesting for a commission (Or making it a group project.)

NerdyBluefox

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Ok. So I'm sure some of you have read some of my other forums. In short, I want to make a addition to Zheng Shi which involves a fanfir (or saurmorian) domme with a cunttail with the potential to expand more in the future, who provides you with the services of two bespoke slaves. A female Essyra and a male, each with two scenes to justify them.

The idea was that the dom was the one who was in charge of the high quality pleasure slaves for the pirates and developing drugs to make the slaves more tailor made for the gangs. (And a reasonable explanation on how they have so many drugs there for easy access like all the Slavebreakers Throbb.) As for the slaves she has, was thinking access for a fee. A little pricey but a guaranteed hot time.

Also, if the player wants to pimp, they can treat the Essyra pleasure girl into a hellhound version of themselves and then the dom, impressed by your handiwork, requests setting up a brothel for her to conduct business outside of Zheng Shi. (Opening it up for further future expansions)

I'm mostly looking for someone to help write the backstories of these characters and to set up the google doc in a commission. I'm not too good with coding but I can get a lot of writing done in my spare time.

The whole, group writing thing is so that everyone can offer their suggestions or add anything that they'd like to the scenes. (For instance additions involving specific bodyparts that don't really get mentioned very often or having the dom sell you some drugs and the effects of doing so.)

So yeah. Looking for someone who's not to busy for me to commission this too at a reasonable price and for anyone else to have a chance to make even a small addition to this.
 

BubbleLord

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So wait; you’re looking for people to design characters with a niche background compilation that facilitates what you want? And to set the doc up for you so you can write it?

If so, I’d be up to help you; backgrounding characters and making good looking documents without actually finishing them is my fetish in TiTS.
 

NerdyBluefox

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So wait; you’re looking for people to design characters with a niche background compilation that facilitates what you want? And to set the doc up for you so you can write it?

If so, I’d be up to help you; backgrounding characters and making good looking documents without actually finishing them is my fetish in TiTS.

Sweet. What are your prices?
 

BubbleLord

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Sweet. What are your prices?
I’d have to know the exact size of the doc and get an idea of how much I’d charge; a very complex doc prep isn’t so hard with words but format presentation. The actual writing beyond that would be 10 USD post-deduction.

It should go without saying that you should consider against writing this over paying seasoned writers/creators, though; making this have an acceptable background won’t set it above the approval bar alone. Be prepared for the real idea it could end up failing even after you’ve commissioned and spent money making it.

Unless you’ve talked the idea over and it sounds good. Then I guess you’re taking a safer risk.
 

NerdyBluefox

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Oh I already spoke to Nonesuch about it. He thinks it's interesting.

He said that 12k words should cover the whole thing but if we're just getting the basics done it should be less than that imo.

Plus if it does fail I can always try and improve it.

It'll mostly be a massage and sex scene for the male slave. There would also be a shopkeeper scene for the dom and her talking about herself and the slaves.

As for the female slave, I'm thinking of her at first being rather skinny and normal but if you buy the treatment for her dom, she'll slowly over time turn into a hellhound Essyra and then you can have sex with her.
 
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