Recent content by Melon_ear

Taking suggestions and critique Evergreen - Better Better Way

- sex gated items are always worst in slot - sex scenes are the only walls of text, regular gameplay and interactions are short descriptions or dialogue with options for how you want to react, this cuts down on speaking for the player and being very very wrong - option to start the game trans...

Hello, it's meLon Ear. This is my first submission and I would like some help getting it off the ground. English is not my first language and I've never really written anything big before but I hope this isn't as bad as I think it is. hi, im not a writer so theres probably a ton of grammatical...

started a new playthrough and heres a new years list of gripes i hope get fixed or nixed in the new year -arona and azzy need to be fought too many times to start their quests, its just tedious. arona takes like 10 if you dont fuck her, make it like 4, azzy takes 3-4 1v1s which can drag, make...

You can be platonic buddies with Cait and do most of her content no problem. Berry you can forget exists until you reach whatever level you need for his quest and he inexplicably falls in love with you after you deal with the crazy witch. Arona just needs to taste the dirt a few times to ask you...

1. "You made me do it" If you don't feed them in the wild they frame it not as them being the ones who choose to assault you but that you are in fact the one who forced them to resort to violence. 2. "I'm making it your problem" Their entire existence in the Frostwood. Their dietary...

Hundreds and hundreds of checks, but you only get one backgrounds so in the best case you get only 150 times that a sentence of two are sprinkled across millions of words and thousands of scenes and buried among many other sentences. Unless there is a way to make the background text BOLD or of a...

I hate bad ends. People see them and have no reason to think they are not canon so it colors their experience with certain asepcts the game usually for the worse. Then they share concerns about it and have to look up someones nose as they get lectured about how "bad ends aren't canon".

I personally dislike Quin because the author decided to slap me with 8 corruption when I decided that I have no good reason to trust him and was given no middle ground between "I trust you completely" and "Go die in a ditch". Time for barely related tangent gripe number 1: The linear...

Thanks to our good pal Schrodinger you don't have no reason to feel bad in the slightest. Kiyoko's imprisonment is entangled to your thoughts on the fox breeding mural. Just be disgusted at it and there will be no fox trapped in an amulet for you to feel guilty about not having a child with in...

If you went to the castle before she jumps, eg you did it in a save from before her second recruitment was added, and don't want to fuck her you are shit out of luck. Her new recruitment was really clunkily implemented. It would have been better to have Carmen offer her contract to you when you...

What with needing Tui to progress Lumiaquest it's likely that she will get a third recruitment path for the people who visited the castle before she jumped them. Coming somewhere between this version and version 1.0

We don't know if Keros sped up the aging or if it's an effect of the orb beyond his control as . And it's a moot point anyway as it's not the story tobs wants to tell.

Kinu ages from 0 to 8 years in orb: I sleep Kinu ages from 8 to 20 years in orb: REAL SHIT! I'll not pretend to be a fan of foxstuff, it's second only to the g family in amount of dislike, but lets not make make shit up to justify hating on it. Outside the orb Kinu is an adult who makes her...