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PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.maybe add some ellipses in addition to the question mark “In a way no Peer would have ever thought of. I just followed my heart,” she... -
PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.change to "of" change to... Im not sure... magnum opus, maybe? bodyguard just doesnt seem very fitting considering the speach she made...
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PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.change to "its" You release a mighty shout and charge the PA-X. You dodge his sharp claw at the last second, avoiding it by a hair’s...
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PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.maybe change to "so" The PA-X doesn’t groan, it doesn’t laugh, it doesn’t hate — it destroys, that’s all it can do, and it does it...
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PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.not a typo, but i heavily reccomend that for the PA-X fight, you give some kind of indication to the player that this isnt a normal...
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I tried picking the option to call steele tech to arrest the good dr after the final boss, and it just... doesnt work. the button doesnt...
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PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.maybe change these to something else, because earlier it had been described as a "war walker", which to me implies a mech of some kind...
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PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.change to "in" “BEHOLD! MY ULTIMATE PEACEKEEPER, THE NEXT STEP TO ZAIKA EVOLUTION: THE PA-X!”
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PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.change to "claw" maybe also change "boiler" to something else? i sure wouldnt call whatever this device is a boiler.... Behind her...
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PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.maybe remove the question mark Dabbebieth frowns. “Ultimate peacekeeper? What are you on about? There’s no one here but you and us?”
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PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.nitpicky again, sorry, but im not sure if "planets" is meant to be capitalized here? sorry A minute later, another alert flares your...
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PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.maybe remove the comma change "hers" to "her" maybe change to "get your inheritance back" maybe change to "when she may double cross...
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An good indicator aswell is to watch at the minimap when entering an new zone, if an Red Skull appears at the bottom of the minimap you... -
PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.maybe change to "chest" or "crate". sorry this and the last one have been more nitpicky. You slowly pry the treasure open. You gawk in...
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PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.maybe change to "speeding off into the horizon", as it would likely just return directly to the EGG and not dissapear into the city...
