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PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.replace "grinded" into "ground" and swap out the hyphen for a thicker one, or at last put another space in front of it Paulette picks a... -
PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.add "a" in between "in quest", and maybe also replace "walls" with "floor"? not sure about that last one tbh, dont think it makes any...
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Maybe replace the "gasmask-like" description of the plate and just leave it at "mask-like" -
PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.good call!
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LeDoraggo replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.Maybe replace the "gasmask-like" description of the plate and just leave it at "mask-like" -
PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.change "alleyway" to "corridor" or something similar. change suffices into "is enough", and maybe also remove the hyphens while aslo...
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LeDoraggo replied to the thread Your Gripes With CoC2.They kinda drop it like its their goddamn keys or something
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I feel like it kinda should tbh, like how are you going to cum out your soul while keros or lumia are holding onto it for you
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answer is simple - THEY cum it out
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PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.change fuel to power, as well as change "earths, steel," to "minerals, metals," “No silly! Dolomite is a kind of sedimentary rock. It’s...
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PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.Maybe add in a bit where it decribes her hugging dabby boi close. thay way it shows that by "we'll sting them" she means herself and...
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PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.change to "grav-cuffs". thats what he has wrapped around him iirc. also, maybe change "pharmacy" to "pharmaceutical"? not 100% sure on...
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PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.an oversight here, bit in order to progress, you actually need to go down in the elevator, not up, so that needs to be changed
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PanzerGuitar00 replied to the thread Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!.maybe replace transports with lifts “Are you sure the lift is operational? Dr. Hellitrix’s guinea pigs damaged heavy geddanium doors —...
