Zil Getaway (WIP) Edit 1 - went from 3k words to nearly 7k.

Emilia Duncan

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I wanted to post this in submissions, but it's too far from being done. (I say as I stare at my 10k word count, wondering why I can't put that effort into other parts of my life) So, considering this is still fanfiction, I even give the Zil a name later on, I figured I'd share bits of it here. Edit as I go and get constructive feedback. I do want to put it into submissions, but only after I get more female scenes in there.

Edit 1 - The Stream. (AKA, bathing with the Zil)
So far I have the initial visit done as well as an option. If you say he's better at sex, he'll let you lead plus gain affinity with the horny bee. Second visit needs a couple more options (Cause Zil are pretty much open to any damn thing) and body variants (Taurs are something I can never wrap my head around.

Link to porn - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LYfvZbMqZmudg4AZ7JGfUjE-g0Mw0q2PcEqdm5MjBvI/edit?usp=sharing
Note, this is not everything I have written. Just a bit of the first night to early morning from a generic Male's perspective. Little over 3k words.

Right now I have the beginning, middle and end written. Just need to add scenes, a lot of scenes...Because, you know, giving a BJ in a cave is not the same as in a river.
Sadly, I only have male focused content mostly done. Again, still adding scenes and so far it's been, "Who is taking it up the butt today? Frotting? That's a sin!"

What inspired it was losing to the male Zil, how the pheromones would affect you and how you would see the Zil with 'adulation'. Calling him, 'master'. I thought to myself, "What if the Zil wanted to be alone with you a couple days?"
So if the PC lost to the Male Zil five times in a row after completing Tarkus (there's a story reason for that) the option to go to the Zil's home is unlocked and you fuck like two horny Zil for a couple days.

Fetishes (so far, and pretty tame tbh) - Anal, oral, vaginal, mind manipulation, slight mind break, repetitive sex, cuddles (the only extreme fetish, I assure you)
 
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