[WIP] Ralph the half-lupine, half-human

[Cooldudesteve]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/18dyCizgvI9ODWf4-oZ8gU3dQcOsF0pem0GCDcGtr7fg/

My doc is VERY unfinished and incomplete. I am still working on it, despite my laziness. I made meditation a reference to a CoC character named jojo, where he trains and meditate with you. Fun fact, I was originally going planned to create a CoC1 dogboy character name dougie because CoC1 is my favorite game, however scene CoC1 died (along with the CoC1 wiki) and the event submission deleted at the forums, I decided to scrapped the idea. However, If daddy fenoxo (no homo) actually brings back event submission for CoC1, I will immediately work on it. Anyway, incase you have some suggestions, I will be happy to agree from suggestions. Anyways I hope you enjoy this.

 

[Emerald]

There isn't anything to even critique on or "enjoy". o.o
You could at least have the basic shit down if you're gonna be posting something, instead of tossing a not even started doc. Even the professionals have SOMETHING written by the time they show their character documents.

To add, turn suggestions on in the doc.

 

[Cooldudesteve]

sorry, just too lazy.
I will still work on it tomorrow.

 

[TheShepard256]

Fun fact, I was originally going planned to create a CoC1 dogboy character name dougie because CoC1 is my favorite game, however scene CoC1 died (along with the CoC1 wiki) and the event submission deleted at the forums, I decided to scrapped the idea. However, If daddy fenoxo (no homo) actually brings back event submission for CoC1, I will immediately work on it.

Fenoxo has explicitly said that CoC is complete i.e. there will be no more updates for it; that means no more event submissions, ever. If you still want to write Dougie, you might as well recycle his content into Ralph's, or make him a separate character for TiTS or CoC2.

Also, from what I've seen of your previous comments, it would be a very good idea for you to work on your literacy skills; you don't come across as having the fluency in English that event submissions require.