[WIP] [Critics and Editors Wanted] Gauryl, the cat/mantis space druid

K367

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This is my first attempt at writing events or a character in detail, so I apologize for my lack of experience.
I need the input of others to learn from and will happily discuss and consider, within reason, any suggestions posted in this thread.

This first link goes to a codex entry for the kyqli, a species of quasi-psychic mantis people.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pXchgmIss8KK18yOyWF7k9TJCxFSmHfbCU6nEtteNjI/edit?usp=sharing

This second link goes to the scenes of a character known as Gauryl, a kyqli/naleen hybrid and a member of the first generation of kyqli born in village located somewhere on Mhen'ga (or in an oasis/grove on another planet, if there is too much shit on Mhen'ga already).

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14IGFIAa7dGisR0NT4OTBZ1iDhFqtV1pN3btV_bgqlj4/edit?usp=sharing

Questions so far

How should I arrange the table of contents under the title?

Should I write anal variants of scenes separately or try to keep all such divergences as curly bracketed if statements?

Should I place imperial measurements next to metric measurements and if so, should I place them in
parenthesis, slash marks, hyphens, or separate statements.

How should I write stat and attribute checks, or do the actual coders just handle all of that?

How much leeway do I get as far as interpreting the personality alignment system?
Like for example, can I create 5 divergences that give different dialogue in 20 point increments such as
Compassionate (Score: < 21), Playful (Score: 21-40), Wildcard (Score: 41-60), Trickster (Score: 60-80),
Bitter (Score: > 80)?

Can I give an NPC I have written different armor options that affect their stats and or abilities in combat?
 
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