"View of family" update 0.0.1a[In progress] !

Pistrun · Mar 10, 2017

GAME INFO

Updated: 2017-03-18
Genre: Alpha, 3D models, Renpy, Sister, brother, Incest
Censorship: None
Version: Ver 0.0.1b
Developer: https://www.patreon.com/marvelsgame
Platform: PC / Windows / Mac
Language: English

"View of family" is a pov, rpg game with some kind of open world... in perspective. A lot of quests will allow you to put yourself in this incredible adventures.
You’ll assume the role of a ordinary 21 year guy... who lives a normal life and working as tutor.
He lives with his sister Nicole and his mother Emily. Help him to seduce all women in this game!

Changelog:

1. The scene in the kitchen is changed.

2. Fixed typographical errors.

3. Temporary map of the city.

All new content will be added to the version 0.0.2.!

And, please, let me know if you find bugs or grammatical mistake.
Download:
PC- https://mega.nz/#!5p1SAKKZ!HvO5rT4LqqoNAJ-Mx9HPI4Jj5ZmAvxu037EGsNXxuNU
Mac- https://mega.nz/#!xpMBWDhS!zWFPIHwULNMxAY10jJiI6hOtF3oA0ZEoih_gmSfpoMA

Pistrun · Mar 10, 2017

Please let me know what do you think about this game.

aweriel · Mar 10, 2017

I think... game is very, very promising. Awesome job. THX

Pistrun · Mar 10, 2017

aweriel said:
I think... game is very, very promising. Awesome job. THX

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it)

Miscellaneous Forum Viewer · Mar 11, 2017

It definitely has potential. I'll be watching the progress with interest.

Pistrun · Mar 11, 2017

Miscellaneous Forum Viewer said:
It definitely has potential. I'll be watching the progress with interest.

Thank you)

Nephilim_Anunnaki · Mar 11, 2017

Ok... I cannot play...

Code:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While loading <'Image' u'F:/Artem/proekt/2/game/images/1/warning.jpg'>:
  File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 212, in script call
    call _splashscreen from _call_splashscreen_1
  File "game/script.rpy", line 19, in script
    show splash with dissolve
IOError: Couldn't find file 'F:/Artem/proekt/2/game/images/1/warning.jpg'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 212, in script call
    call _splashscreen from _call_splashscreen_1
  File "game/script.rpy", line 19, in script
    show splash with dissolve
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1275, in execute
    renpy.exports.with_statement(trans, paired)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\exports.py", line 1376, in with_statement
    return renpy.game.interface.do_with(trans, paired, clear=clear)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 2062, in do_with
    clear=clear)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 2492, in interact
    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, **kwargs)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 2845, in interact_core
    self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 1921, in draw_screen
    renpy.config.screen_height,
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 416, in renpy.display.render.render_screen (gen\renpy.display.render.c:6687)
    rv = render(root, width, height, 0, 0)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2859)
    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 685, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 103, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3321)
    cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2859)
    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\transition.py", line 361, in render
    top = render(self.new_widget, width, height, st, at)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 103, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3321)
    cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2859)
    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 685, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 103, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3321)
    cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2859)
    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 685, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 103, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3321)
    cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2859)
    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
  File "renpy/display/accelerator.pyx", line 108, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render (gen\renpy.display.accelerator.c:2027)
    cr = render(child, widtho, heighto, st - self.child_st_base, at)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2859)
    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\image.py", line 294, in render
    return wrap_render(self.target, width, height, st, at)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\image.py", line 125, in wrap_render
    rend = render(child, w, h, st, at)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 103, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3321)
    cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2859)
    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\im.py", line 473, in render
    im = cache.get(self)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\im.py", line 200, in get
    surf = image.load()
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\im.py", line 524, in load
    surf = renpy.display.pgrender.load_image(renpy.loader.load(self.filename), self.filename)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\loader.py", line 543, in load
    raise IOError("Couldn't find file '%s'." % name)
IOError: Couldn't find file 'F:/Artem/proekt/2/game/images/1/warning.jpg'.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 6.99.12.2.2029
View of family 0.0.1

Pistrun · Mar 11, 2017

Nephilim_Anunnaki said:

Ok... I cannot play...

Code:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While loading <'Image' u'F:/Artem/proekt/2/game/images/1/warning.jpg'>:
  File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 212, in script call
    call _splashscreen from _call_splashscreen_1
  File "game/script.rpy", line 19, in script
    show splash with dissolve
IOError: Couldn't find file 'F:/Artem/proekt/2/game/images/1/warning.jpg'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 212, in script call
    call _splashscreen from _call_splashscreen_1
  File "game/script.rpy", line 19, in script
    show splash with dissolve
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1275, in execute
    renpy.exports.with_statement(trans, paired)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\exports.py", line 1376, in with_statement
    return renpy.game.interface.do_with(trans, paired, clear=clear)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 2062, in do_with
    clear=clear)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 2492, in interact
    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, **kwargs)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 2845, in interact_core
    self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 1921, in draw_screen
    renpy.config.screen_height,
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 416, in renpy.display.render.render_screen (gen\renpy.display.render.c:6687)
    rv = render(root, width, height, 0, 0)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2859)
    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 685, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 103, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3321)
    cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2859)
    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\transition.py", line 361, in render
    top = render(self.new_widget, width, height, st, at)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 103, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3321)
    cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2859)
    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 685, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 103, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3321)
    cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2859)
    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 685, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 103, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3321)
    cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2859)
    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
  File "renpy/display/accelerator.pyx", line 108, in renpy.display.accelerator.transform_render (gen\renpy.display.accelerator.c:2027)
    cr = render(child, widtho, heighto, st - self.child_st_base, at)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2859)
    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\image.py", line 294, in render
    return wrap_render(self.target, width, height, st, at)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\image.py", line 125, in wrap_render
    rend = render(child, w, h, st, at)
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 103, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:3321)
    cpdef render(d, object widtho, object heighto, double st, double at):
  File "renpy/display/render.pyx", line 185, in renpy.display.render.render (gen\renpy.display.render.c:2859)
    rv = d.render(widtho, heighto, st, at)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\im.py", line 473, in render
    im = cache.get(self)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\im.py", line 200, in get
    surf = image.load()
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\display\im.py", line 524, in load
    surf = renpy.display.pgrender.load_image(renpy.loader.load(self.filename), self.filename)
  File "C:\Users\Nyrreah\Desktop\probar\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\View_of_family-0.0.1-pc\renpy\loader.py", line 543, in load
    raise IOError("Couldn't find file '%s'." % name)
IOError: Couldn't find file 'F:/Artem/proekt/2/game/images/1/warning.jpg'.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 6.99.12.2.2029
View of family 0.0.1

Press "Ignore". This should help.
I'll fix it soon.

xyzabc198 · Mar 12, 2017

I know you are hoping for lots of feedback, but to be honest it's a little bit hard to give you much right now, because there isn't a really a game here. With it being so short at the moment, it means that there aren't many options, there's no story, there's only one girl who I personally don't find attractive and there are millions of errors in both spelling and grammar. I guess my feedback is that the game has potential, but you have a LOT of work to do before you get there, and you DEFINITELY need to get somebody to spell and grammar check your game, as an Englishman myself, I was slightly insulted lol

Nephilim_Anunnaki · Mar 12, 2017

Pistrun said:
Press "Ignore". This should help.
I'll fix it soon.

I hit ignore, but nothing happens.

Pistrun · Mar 12, 2017

xyzabc198 said:
I was slightly insulted lol

Sorry for that)

Pistrun · Mar 12, 2017

Nephilim_Anunnaki said:
I hit ignore, but nothing happens.

You should hit ignore 3 times. Or download again I had fixed all bugs.

Cog · Mar 12, 2017

After reading xyzabc198's comment, I was going to try to proofing my run through, but (while I won't be as harsh as he was) you've got misspellings and grammatical errors on nearly every line. 'I' as a pronoun should always be capitalized. Most interjections are clauses, and need to be treated as such (which means putting commas around them or making them their own sentence entirely). You've got some odd archaic language near the beginning, and you've got some major issues with contractions.

That's just the stuff I remember.

Eh, while I'm at it, @xyzabc198, your last sentence is a run-on.

I'll try to turn off the copy editor in my brain now.

xyzabc198 · Mar 13, 2017

Cog said:
After reading xyzabc198's comment, I was going to try to proofing my run through, but (while I won't be as harsh as he was) you've got misspellings and grammatical errors on nearly every line. 'I' as a pronoun should always be capitalized. Most interjections are clauses, and need to be treated as such (which means putting commas around them or making them their own sentence entirely). You've got some odd archaic language near the beginning, and you've got some major issues with contractions.

That's just the stuff I remember.

Eh, while I'm at it, @xyzabc198, your last sentence is a run-on.

I'll try to turn off the copy editor in my brain now.

Okay, first of all, I wasn't trying to be harsh, I was trying to make a point, I feel that honest feedback is better than saying how perfect everything is, he needs to know what peoples issues are so he knows how to fix them.

As for my own personal grammatical errors, I never claimed I was good at English myself, only that the English in this game left a lot to be desired, and I am not writing an essay, or a game or anything like that, I am writing on a forum, so I'm not too concerned with how good my grammar is on here :S

Marnox · Apr 25, 2017

i went to download this and its not up..is there a way to get it still?

Pistrun · Apr 25, 2017

Marnox said:
i went to download this and its not up..is there a way to get it still?

You can download it from here:

https://forum.fenoxo.com/threads/view-of-family-0-0-1b-version-in-progress.8943/

Marnox · Apr 26, 2017

Pistrun said:
You can download it from here:

https://forum.fenoxo.com/threads/view-of-family-0-0-1b-version-in-progress.8943/

Great thank you

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