[v 0.4.28] Lyla typos

[Ace Hangman]

[Hang Out; Try for Kiss]

'Her tights on the other hand aren't capable of withstanding ...'

Should be 'thighs'.


[Sex; First time]

seeing a seven inches cock jump

Should be 'seven inch'

She starts moving her cock, the tip circling only millimeters away from your lips, and you answer with a nod.

From the rest of the way this scene is written, it seems like this part shouldn't be italicized. Maybe it wasn't closed properly in the previous line.

Then Lyla starts moaning, her femenine howl calling for your attention,

'feminine' is misspelled.

"I don’t think it’s necessary for me to walk you out, right?" she says,flipping a lock of wavy dark hair to the opposite side of her head.

Should be a space between 'she says' and 'flipping'.

 

[Ace Hangman]

[Sex; I want to fuck; Assfuck]

"It’s my underwear. They may be covered with my juices, since I got very horny when I saw you approching.

'approaching' is misspelled.

You let out a high pitched moan, so loud not even the stained underwear inside your mouth can silence.

Should at 'it' to the end of the sentence.

since the way she’s fucking you diserves every praise.

'deserves' is misspelled.



[Sex; I want to fuck; Assfuck; Ass(take load in ass)]

Then you feel Lyla cock throbbing,

Should be 'Lyla's' with an apostrophe s.

"For fuck's sake,you can't even cum properly without my help,"

Should be a space between 'sake,' and 'you'.

Now, the only thing stopping you from failing to the cum covered ground is Lyla’s cock pinning you against the tree, her meat still hard as a rock, pumping seed into your ass with each throbb.

Should be 'falling' instead of 'failing' and 'throb' is misspelled.

'Your butt chooses to remain up, as if proudly displaying your ruined hole to the skies while your head handles the shame and stays down into the poodle, ...'

Should be 'puddle' instead of 'poodle'. At least... I don't recall there being any poodles there.

getting covered in the same load you spurred just seconds ago.

It should probably be 'spurted instead of 'spurred'.

'You feel her cum leaving you gaping asshole, ...'

Should be 'your gaping asshole'.

 

[Ace Hangman]

[Sex; Assfuck; Mouth (take load in mouth)]

'Lyla pulls out, stepping away without warning, making you ass gape at the sudden emptiness that takes you by surprise.'

Should be 'making your ass gape'.


[Sex; Assfuck; Face (take load in face)]

Lyla pulls out, stepping away without warning, making you ass gape at the sudden emptiness

Should be 'your gaping asshole'.

'Heavy drops fall onto your close eyelids, ...'

Should be 'closed eyelids'.


[Sex; Keep Fighting (with pussy and buttplug)]

You produce your buttplug in your palm and rise it towards her

Should be 'raise' instead of 'rise'


[Sex; Keep Fighting (with pussy and buttplug); Stop]

Your arms wrap her leg with all your strenght

'strength' is misspelled.



[Sex; Missionary]

'Despite the cold of the Froostwood ...'

'Frostwood' is misspelled.

but It seems like she's planning on teasing you

'it' shouldn't be capitalized.

'With a pleased moan, she grants you the honor of seathing her dick inside ...'

Should be 'sheathing'.

 

[Ace Hangman]

[Sex; Fuck her pussy]

"Start getting naked."

Not a typo, but the way the scene is written indicates that the writer wants the speech to be italicized, so this sentence should be.



[Sex; Fuck her pussy; Just watch]

One of her hands caresses the pale skin of her flat belly and keeps moving down until it reachesher cock.

Should be a space between 'reaches' and 'her'