[Wardens' Lodge, one north and one west of entrance]
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The end of the sentence should be 'these are supposed to be wild foxes', add a 'be'.
[Komari & Miko, Pregnancy announcement]
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It should be 'a roof over their heads', not under.You suppose the extra discomfort is so that this lot doesn't get too used to sleeping with a roof under their heads... harsh, perhaps, but these are supposed to wild foxes.
The end of the sentence should be 'these are supposed to be wild foxes', add a 'be'.
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The end of the sentence should be 'now, isn't it?' instead of 'not, isn't it?'.'"Which wouldn't have come to pass if the lazy girl hadn't gotten into the habit of feigning illness when she was younger, but it's too late for that not, isn't it?'
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