[v 0.4.28] Kitsune Den typos

Ace Hangman

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[Wardens' Lodge, one north and one west of entrance]
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You suppose the extra discomfort is so that this lot doesn't get too used to sleeping with a roof under their heads... harsh, perhaps, but these are supposed to wild foxes.
It should be 'a roof over their heads', not under.
The end of the sentence should be 'these are supposed to be wild foxes', add a 'be'.
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[Komari & Miko, Pregnancy announcement]
'"Which wouldn't have come to pass if the lazy girl hadn't gotten into the habit of feigning illness when she was younger, but it's too late for that not, isn't it?'
The end of the sentence should be 'now, isn't it?' instead of 'not, isn't it?'.
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