Typos yet again

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XBoxMaster131

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Sorry Geddy, but youre not getting rid of me that easy!




missing space after the highlighted hyphen

“Such talent! So there is a victor in you after all, alien! I see now - you’re the exception to the rule...! Yes -show me what makes you different from the others of your rapacious kind!”
 

XBoxMaster131

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perhaps replace "of" with "or"? Sorry this is a more of a suggestion.



Pleasure hisses off her lolling tongue as you suck the bestial tigress’ tit into your drooling maw; her tummy gets all the pats - oh fuck, her tummy. Smooth and flat, lacking the hardness of definition you’d expect. Cords of shifting muscle can be felt, but a lifetime of pregnancies has irrevocably softened her gut to maximize this woman’s primitive sex appeal.
 
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