I've finally decied to stop lurking, half-writing stories, and mooning over all the possible things I could have made, and actually get of my arse and finish something... well, since I'm writing, I'm technically getting on my arse, but that is a moot point. I've wrote a thing, I've created an account, and I've got something to submit.
I'm Comproser, and this is my first actual contribution to the world of lewd games - a short CYOA Twine Story. It's not actually 100% finished yet, but despite the version number I've picked, it really is nearly done. I just want to expand a few more of the earlier passages, proof read and grammer correct (tenses especially) and correct some of the ending logic - one currently has two methods to reach it, and has some contradictions between the ending passage, and the previous events.
Right now, depending what you choose, and what order events occur in, there are 8 endings you can find. I'd like to sign post some of the logic a little more, with a little foreshadowing, but I'm happy enough the early version. I don't expect this to take more than to more revisions to be complete in my eyes. Please let me know of any grammar or tense errors you find, and any other critique you have as well.
CheerReamer v0.1
https://mega.nz/#!2jYk2Yhb!eWx9uH_9xVjsH-Ent9inb782VJpTWNkqW2_CKpXxN68
As the name may preclude, the games centres around a cheerleader, you has somethign up her skirt - in this couse, down her trousers. Also, no actualy reaming so far, this is an oral adventure. I may release a sequel chapter as a future project.
Tags: Dickgirl, Oral, Dickgirl on Male (oral), Femdom, Size Difference, Male on Dickgirl (oral)
I've nothing like a patreon as of yet - should people enjoy my work, and should I actually reamin faithful to my newly stated commitmnet, it might be something I'll set up in the future. Until such time, all my work will be free, at all stages, but do let me know If I've output something quality here. I like it, but I wrote it - my opinion is remarkably suspect.
Hugs For Everyone,
Comproser
I'm Comproser, and this is my first actual contribution to the world of lewd games - a short CYOA Twine Story. It's not actually 100% finished yet, but despite the version number I've picked, it really is nearly done. I just want to expand a few more of the earlier passages, proof read and grammer correct (tenses especially) and correct some of the ending logic - one currently has two methods to reach it, and has some contradictions between the ending passage, and the previous events.
Right now, depending what you choose, and what order events occur in, there are 8 endings you can find. I'd like to sign post some of the logic a little more, with a little foreshadowing, but I'm happy enough the early version. I don't expect this to take more than to more revisions to be complete in my eyes. Please let me know of any grammar or tense errors you find, and any other critique you have as well.
CheerReamer v0.1
https://mega.nz/#!2jYk2Yhb!eWx9uH_9xVjsH-Ent9inb782VJpTWNkqW2_CKpXxN68
As the name may preclude, the games centres around a cheerleader, you has somethign up her skirt - in this couse, down her trousers. Also, no actualy reaming so far, this is an oral adventure. I may release a sequel chapter as a future project.
Tags: Dickgirl, Oral, Dickgirl on Male (oral), Femdom, Size Difference, Male on Dickgirl (oral)
I've nothing like a patreon as of yet - should people enjoy my work, and should I actually reamin faithful to my newly stated commitmnet, it might be something I'll set up in the future. Until such time, all my work will be free, at all stages, but do let me know If I've output something quality here. I like it, but I wrote it - my opinion is remarkably suspect.
Hugs For Everyone,
Comproser
