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<blockquote data-quote="Superfreq" data-source="post: 441221" data-attributes="member: 34780"><p>Nina's vision quest part II</p><p></p><p>Quest intro page</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35901[/ATTACH]</p><p>//"get" should be "gets".</p><p>Nina swallows hard, but <em>get</em> ahold of herself and tries, clutching at the emptiness and pulling her hand back.</p><p></p><p>beginning warped wayfort exploration with Nina</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35902[/ATTACH]</p><p>//Looks like there's an " a " missing here as a connective word.</p><p>That kinda killed any interest on my part to go and look for myself — if the lurelings say it's bad stuff, all the more <em>reason small</em> fry like me should stay away."</p><p></p><p>meeting Thalia the salamander in the warped wayfort mess hall</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35904[/ATTACH]</p><p>//Some missing text here, probably meant to be "sending is a".</p><p>Holding out her hands palms forward as she steps forward, the Astrida probably intends to mean you no harm, but what her hands are <em>send a</em> rather different message.</p><p></p><p>//This should be plural.</p><p>Heavy, clawed <em>hand</em> adorned with thick scales and hooked tips, not to mention the horns...</p><p></p><p>//The word "you" is missing here.</p><p>Nina shrinks back behind you, <em>and give</em> her a reassuring pat on the wing.</p><p></p><p>warped wayfort mess hall description</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35903[/ATTACH]</p><p>//Missing words here, most likely something like "was torn apart" or "came apart".</p><p>The suddenness with which <em>everything apart</em> is startling, even if not surprising.</p><p></p><p>Thalia the salamander explains how she died</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35905[/ATTACH]</p><p>//Missing an "of".</p><p>They'd opened a portal, Alara — they'd torn open the sky, something that only happened as a <em>result the</em> confluence of great supernatural powers.</p><p></p><p>opening the chest in the warped wayfort watchtower</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35906[/ATTACH]</p><p>//"from".</p><p>You're putting the find away when you hear a grunt <em>front</em> Nina.</p><p></p><p>//"her" should be "the".</p><p>The silly bird-brain has her hands on <em>her</em> lid and is trying to lift the wordlock chest out of its resting place, only to find that it's screwed down where it stands.</p><p></p><p>collapsed bookshelf in warped wayfort watchtower</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35907[/ATTACH]</p><p>//"showing".</p><p>I won't put it in the southern courtyard — surely there's a dignified corner out of the way where I can hide it while plausibly <em>show</em> it respect or something.</p><p></p><p>//Missing a connecting "the".</p><p>I'll have to source all the mirrorwine I can somehow — given that <em>it's only</em> true luxury our lands produce that the imperials really want, I'm sure the wizards will take to it well.</p><p></p><p>cracked bookshelf in warped wayfort watchtower</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35908[/ATTACH]</p><p>//I asume that "gives" was supposed to be "aids" but it could also be "gives to".</p><p>Why these gods allowed things to come to this point and only intervene when the entire world lies in ruin is beyond me, but anything that <em>gives</em> the garrison is welcome.</p><p></p><p>//"saw".</p><p>She certainly sa it coming and was working some spell, but didn't manage to get it off.</p><p></p><p>entering warped wayfort sleeping quarters for the first time</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35909[/ATTACH]</p><p>//Missing word here, probably "may" or "could.</p><p>Know what? That does make sense, given that you're dealing with what very <em>well be</em> figments of your own nightmares, or at least your own that've been thrown into the mix.</p><p></p><p>asking Nina about the broken psyches</p><p>[ATTACH=full]35910[/ATTACH]</p><p>//Missing word here, I'm thinking likely "before".</p><p>"You don't have to feel bad about putting them down, they were never people and more are just going to keep on coming out the <em>walls we</em> get to wherever it is we're going.</p><p></p><p>Continued in next post</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Superfreq, post: 441221, member: 34780"] Nina's vision quest part II Quest intro page [ATTACH type="full"]35901[/ATTACH] //"get" should be "gets". Nina swallows hard, but [I]get[/I] ahold of herself and tries, clutching at the emptiness and pulling her hand back. beginning warped wayfort exploration with Nina [ATTACH=full]35902[/ATTACH] //Looks like there's an " a " missing here as a connective word. That kinda killed any interest on my part to go and look for myself — if the lurelings say it's bad stuff, all the more [I]reason small[/I] fry like me should stay away." meeting Thalia the salamander in the warped wayfort mess hall [ATTACH=full]35904[/ATTACH] //Some missing text here, probably meant to be "sending is a". Holding out her hands palms forward as she steps forward, the Astrida probably intends to mean you no harm, but what her hands are [I]send a[/I] rather different message. //This should be plural. Heavy, clawed [I]hand[/I] adorned with thick scales and hooked tips, not to mention the horns... //The word "you" is missing here. Nina shrinks back behind you, [I]and give[/I] her a reassuring pat on the wing. warped wayfort mess hall description [ATTACH=full]35903[/ATTACH] //Missing words here, most likely something like "was torn apart" or "came apart". The suddenness with which [I]everything apart[/I] is startling, even if not surprising. Thalia the salamander explains how she died [ATTACH=full]35905[/ATTACH] //Missing an "of". They'd opened a portal, Alara — they'd torn open the sky, something that only happened as a [I]result the[/I] confluence of great supernatural powers. opening the chest in the warped wayfort watchtower [ATTACH=full]35906[/ATTACH] //"from". You're putting the find away when you hear a grunt [I]front[/I] Nina. //"her" should be "the". The silly bird-brain has her hands on [I]her[/I] lid and is trying to lift the wordlock chest out of its resting place, only to find that it's screwed down where it stands. collapsed bookshelf in warped wayfort watchtower [ATTACH=full]35907[/ATTACH] //"showing". I won't put it in the southern courtyard — surely there's a dignified corner out of the way where I can hide it while plausibly [I]show[/I] it respect or something. //Missing a connecting "the". I'll have to source all the mirrorwine I can somehow — given that [I]it's only[/I] true luxury our lands produce that the imperials really want, I'm sure the wizards will take to it well. cracked bookshelf in warped wayfort watchtower [ATTACH=full]35908[/ATTACH] //I asume that "gives" was supposed to be "aids" but it could also be "gives to". Why these gods allowed things to come to this point and only intervene when the entire world lies in ruin is beyond me, but anything that [I]gives[/I] the garrison is welcome. //"saw". She certainly sa it coming and was working some spell, but didn't manage to get it off. entering warped wayfort sleeping quarters for the first time [ATTACH=full]35909[/ATTACH] //Missing word here, probably "may" or "could. Know what? That does make sense, given that you're dealing with what very [I]well be[/I] figments of your own nightmares, or at least your own that've been thrown into the mix. asking Nina about the broken psyches [ATTACH=full]35910[/ATTACH] //Missing word here, I'm thinking likely "before". "You don't have to feel bad about putting them down, they were never people and more are just going to keep on coming out the [I]walls we[/I] get to wherever it is we're going. Continued in next post [/QUOTE]
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