[Submitted] Thyvara abandoned camp xpac

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Athena

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I dunno about anyone else, but I've read through the document, and I couldn't find anything to complain about. It seems pretty good overall. Granted, I haven't had a chance to read through Thyvara's main content, so I don't know how it compares, or if there are any discrepancies as far as characterization are concerned, but on it's own it seems fine.
 
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