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Fwfrakes

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Shower masturbation scene
With every twitch you feel your cumslit widening from within, pushed open by that slowly-building pressure of preseed aching to come out.
there needs to be a hyphen between pre and seed

so pre-seed
 
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Fwfrakes

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“Hey,” he says, because that’s definitely a male voice, though even up close it’s still pretty hard to tell just by looking at him. “Like what you see? Or are you just here for the conversation?” The prettyboy winks, still grinning broadly and not at all subtly eyeing your assets in turn.
missing space between pretty and boy.
 

Fwfrakes

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Your lips caress that ausar woman’s knotted rod all the way down, tongue coating her red, throbbing dick with your saliva as the water falling down around you wets your skin. You have Syri moaning by the time your lips reach her turgid knot, your spittle dripping down onto the thick red ball of cockflesh from your slightly parted lips.
Grammar suggestion, replace "that" with "the", thus "Your lips caress the ausar woman’s knotted rod ... "