Rumie typos [v. 0.4.28]

Ace Hangman

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[Fuck; Lap Ride] (in Wayfort)
slamming your prick brutally home in her forgiving right while your fingers dig into her tummy
The word 'right' seems either out of place, or misspelled. Maybe it was meant to be 'ring', as in 'slamming into her forgiving ring' or 'inside her forgiving ring'.
If it's meant to mean something else, like you slamming into her 'right as' your fingers dig into her tummy, then that should be cleared up as 'into her forgiving [whatever] right as your fingers [do whatever]'.
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Ace Hangman

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[V.0.4.34]
[Drinks; Vodka]
When you exhale the curious not-taste of filtered alcohol ride son your breath,
Should be a comma after 'exhale'. Should be 'rides on' instead of 'ride son'.
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[Drinks; Milk]
she pulls up a pitcher of pupperidge milk,
'Pupperidge' should be capitalized.
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[Drinks; Pupper Ale]
Anna and Morwen are sat either side of you tails wagging and faces proud.
Should probably be 'sat to either side' and there should be a comma between 'you' and 'tails'.
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giving you a bright smile of her own, sipping from a half-pint mug of her own.
Should probably remove the first 'of her own', since it looks odd being repeated in the same sentence.
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