Rindo typos [v.0.4.34]

Ace Hangman

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Fighting Kazuo's puppets.
[Task, Fight puppets, Victory]
'... — all smashed and broken, although judging by what Rindo it shouldn't be too hard ...'
Should be 'by what Rindo said it' instead of 'by what Rindo it'.
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[Sex; Doggystyle (as Concubine and after pregnancy if that matters).
you pound her over and over again, , her insides gripping you
Remove the extra comma.
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Not that Rindo is in any state of hear you
Should be 'to hear you'.
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with determine fury
Should be 'determined'.
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driving home the face
Should be 'fact' instead of 'face'.
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her beastial nature
'bestial' is misspelled. Yes, I know it's weird, like 'Bestiary' instead of 'Beastiary'
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move your tips anymore
Should be 'hips' instead of 'tips'
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Juices splatter her thighs and ass her elbows and knees finally give way,
Should be something between 'ass' and 'her elbows'. Possibly 'as' or even just a comma.
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with the sheer amount you're pouring into here
Should be 'her' instead of 'here'.
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Ace Hangman

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[Sex; Full Nelson (as Concubine and after pregnancy)]
even after putting on a bit of weight even after putting on a bit of weight she's so light
There's one too many 'even after putting on a bit of weight'.
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and grab her thighs by just under her butt.
'by' isn't needed. It would either be 'and grab her thighs just under her butt' or more likely 'and grab her thighs near her butt'
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Rindo doesn't have as long tails as some other kitsune,
It should probably be 'have tails as long as' instead of 'have as long tails as'.
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while you've for your arms locking her head in place.
Should be 'got' instead of 'for'.
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she cranes her neck over, and despite the position the two of you are in manage a brief kiss that makes it all worth the effort.
The comma should come after 'and' and before 'despite'. There should be a comma before 'manage' and it should be 'manages' instead of 'manage'.
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your arms burn you can't stand it much longer.
Add 'and' between 'burn' and 'you' Should be 'your arms burn and you can't ...'
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and suckles as your rod
Should be 'at' instead of 'as'
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her cosy sleeping chambers.
Not a typo, but 'cozy' would be the American version, while 'cosy' would be the British version; like 'fantasize' or 'fantasise'. So it depends on who your intended audience is for which to use (or depending on the scene and character using the word). Just my OCD pointing this out. As long as it's consistent, I suppose, I don't know if CoC2 has a designated 'target audience'.
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her body long since having given up its instinctive struggling long ago
Should either remove 'long since' or 'long ago', since they both mean the same thing in the same sentence.
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