Retfird the odd Doutren [WIP]

Chillztop

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DISCLAIMER:besides being new,i'm a novice writer at best so i'll have few challenges up ahead smut being one of them, so i would appreciate feedback on things i could change,i could add,etc


With that out of the way, the project, namely the npc is WIP.


The npc is new race,you can interact with her i’ll include later a option that enables her sell a mod to make you look like her, she will have a affection level/mechanic which gives the pc neat things like new scenes.(still thinking of other cool stuff to add),and she will have some weird/different(basically kinda like kamasutra) sex scenes(God help on this one) which i will leave for last.

There will 3 sex scenes one where you do cunningulus upside down
A body/limbs(i dont care at this point)joint lock where she teases and penatrates with her looong tail
And a gangbang with spirits(dont tell me i dont said it was gonna be this weird)

She kinda of an oddball an amazonian like woman with an odd personality (i dont what else i can describe her for, i'll look into it)
I will try update as often as i can,of course there will be problems that could take me a day to fix.


The codex:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rLKNgCVad47fo_9zkuU2_eeNRZuRjHJREcyDCI3RDB8/edit?usp=drivesdk

The project:https://docs.google.com/document/d/104Om4cslC_M1ZW_uUvPwowdQbfNlPZ3dV2iY630q4ks/edit?usp=drivesdk


Current status:tweaking codex

Codex: Incomplete
1.adding a few more lines to history

Changelog:still sorting the list

Skeleton key:unfinished,10/100
Npc name:decided,finished
Intro:100/100
Appearance:90/100,may add more
Talk:25/100,need to add more options and variations
Trap/tomboy variations:0/100,patience
Sex:10/100,introduction done,need to add variations and apply the affection on scenes
Affection mechanic, pending
TF mod:decided,0/100
Lover status present:decided,0/100
 
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Klaptrap

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A list of fetishes and pairings would be appreciated. If you would allow comments on your docs I might leave a few suggestions.
 

Chillztop

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A list of fetishes and pairings would be appreciated. If you would allow comments on your docs I might leave a few suggestions.
Where should i place the list? In the post or the doc because im kinda new to this kinda writing
 

Klaptrap

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Where should i place the list? In the post or the doc because im kinda new to this kinda writing
First post in the thread is usually where all the important info is gathered. If this project kicks off it would be useful to keep a change log there as well.