[Ren'Py][Patreon] Naughty Good Girl Demo

[Succubi Games]

Hi, everyone.

I go by MistressMay. My sister, Church Girl, and I have released a demo of a game we've been working on. There's definitely room for improvement but given that we had a budget of $50 and this was our first game, I think we did a decent job. Hopefully, you'll agree if you play our little preview. Anyway this is a decision based visual novel. So, everything from your responses, actions, and even what you choose to wear has consequences in the game. You can download it for free on our Patreon. Hope you enjoy it!

*Since this is the first time we're creating and promoting our game, we apologize if we lack knowledge or etiquette in our posts. Please be patient with us as we are trying to figure it out*

Description:
You are Elise, a girl who has been raised in a conservative family all her life. She has just turned 18 and it's up to you whether she stays on the straight and narrow or decides to take a detour. Be careful in your choices as they have consequences going forward.

What's In the Game:
Right now, the demo is pretty vanilla with solo scenes and a surprise MF scene. This will definitely change as more content is added.

Any other questions, I'll be more than happy to answer.

https://www.patreon.com/SuccubiGames

 

[Jash]

OK, I went against my normal principles by clicking on your Patreon, just to see if you'd put the game's description there instead, but no luck.

Look. Can we make one thing CRYSTAL clear here? If you want to promote your game on this forum, feel free, but just do us one small favour, OK?

Tell us what the game's about.

Maybe I should say it louder?

TELL. US. WHAT. THE. GAME. IS. ABOUT.

DON'T just say "Hey, we made a game, come look at it!" No! We don't want to! We don't know what it is! We don't know what's in it! Do you think our lives are so empty that we have nothing better to do with them then download game demos completely at random?

The general rule here is "post pairings (MxF, FxF, MxM, MMF etc etc) and fetishes (incest, Nice Time for Roo, watersports, hand-holding etc)" so people know whether the game has something that specifically appeals to them, or conversely, content that they'd prefer to avoid. But COME ON, you could at least give us a vague description of what the game is about first! ALL we know is that it's a "decision based visual novel" (which literally just tells us that it's not a kinetic novel, or a comedy kart racer) and that there presumably is A Girl in it. That's IT. And frankly, that's not enough to attract our attention. Do you have ANY idea how crowded the indie porn game market is these days? There are THOUSANDS of games out there, with more being made every day. If you want us to take a look at your game (and ESPECIALLY if you want us to give you financial support for it, which the existence of a Patreon suggests that you do), we need more to go on than "Hey, we made a game, come look at it!" So TELL US! And don't be all coy and "mysterious" with the "[Character] is a naive, virginal teen girl who finds herself in a mysterious and challenging situation where things happen beyond her wildest imaginations, dot dot dot"- TELL us what these situations are about. Don't make us use our imaginations- YOU are trying to convince US to want to try your game, don't leave the hard work of making it sound interesting to US. Does she get dragged to hell by succubi and tormented with unimagined sexual depravities, or does she get a job at a burger franchise where the manager is a six-foot anthropomorphic ferret called Francoise?

So...

What's this game about, then?

 

[Succubi Games]

OK, I went against my normal principles by clicking on your Patreon, just to see if you'd put the game's description there instead, but no luck.

Look. Can we make one thing CRYSTAL clear here? If you want to promote your game on this forum, feel free, but just do us one small favour, OK?

Tell us what the game's about.

Maybe I should say it louder?

TELL. US. WHAT. THE. GAME. IS. ABOUT.

DON'T just say "Hey, we made a game, come look at it!" No! We don't want to! We don't know what it is! We don't know what's in it! Do you think our lives are so empty that we have nothing better to do with them then download game demos completely at random?

The general rule here is "post pairings (MxF, FxF, MxM, MMF etc etc) and fetishes (incest, Nice Time for Roo, watersports, hand-holding etc)" so people know whether the game has something that specifically appeals to them, or conversely, content that they'd prefer to avoid. But COME ON, you could at least give us a vague description of what the game is about first! ALL we know is that it's a "decision based visual novel" (which literally just tells us that it's not a kinetic novel, or a comedy kart racer) and that there presumably is A Girl in it. That's IT. And frankly, that's not enough to attract our attention. Do you have ANY idea how crowded the indie porn game market is these days? There are THOUSANDS of games out there, with more being made every day. If you want us to take a look at your game (and ESPECIALLY if you want us to give you financial support for it, which the existence of a Patreon suggests that you do), we need more to go on than "Hey, we made a game, come look at it!" So TELL US! And don't be all coy and "mysterious" with the "[Character] is a naive, virginal teen girl who finds herself in a mysterious and challenging situation where things happen beyond her wildest imaginations, dot dot dot"- TELL us what these situations are about. Don't make us use our imaginations- YOU are trying to convince US to want to try your game, don't leave the hard work of making it sound interesting to US. Does she get dragged to hell by succubi and tormented with unimagined sexual depravities, or does she get a job at a burger franchise where the manager is a six-foot anthropomorphic ferret called Francoise?

So...

What's this game about, then?

OK, first let me apologize for my lack of etiquette as I'm new to this. As I stated, this is the first game we've ever made and I have no clue how to promote a game nor the right protocols when it comes to posting on a forum.

As for the demo, consider it a prototype. It's about a young woman who has grown up in a conservative household her entire life. She's just turned 18 and either wants to "explore" her newfound adulthood or stay true to her conservative values. It's up to you to choose which route she takes.

As for what's in it, right now it's pretty vanilla. Some solo masturbation and a MF scene with a twist. What that twist is, the player has to discover themselves. Anything else you'd like to know, I'll happily answer. But I also ask that people be patient with me as I have to discover this promoting angle.

 

[Kesil]

I have no clue how to promote a game nor the right protocols when it comes to posting on a forum.

Reading the pinned threads are a must for all newcomers. This includes the Adult game thread guideline.

 

[Succubi Games]

Reading the pinned threads are a must for all newcomers. This includes the Adult game thread guideline.

Thanks for that. I'll take a look.

 

[Kesil]

You're welcome! Here's hoping it can help you. Personally, I advise checking other game threads and apply what you think you may need.

 

[Succubi Games]

You're welcome! Here's hoping it can help you. Personally, I advise checking other game threads and apply what you think you may need.

Thank you so much for this. I didn't even know about the showcase until you pointed me to it. I was able to see what others had posted and followed suit.

 

[Kesil]

You're very welcome.