So here's the preliminary writing for a follow-up on that Nyrean Alpha thing.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ybpFA7TUSX3Ah5SXfIp0KsWsK0YIyZZAzK0Ok3K3yEw/edit?usp=sharing
Just the first part of the first scene, ends right before the Alpha chooses your ass or womb (or throat, if you're an asshole and got rid of your genitals in between being fucked by her and this scene). I figure I'd submit it for critique early because I'm using someone else's characters and I'd rather find out something is wrong now than after writing 3,000 words.
I was considering writing a more ador(k)able route for the Beta too, wherein you submit to her to the point she gains confidence having made a breeder out of an offworlder and becomes an Alpha, keeping you as the first in her harem. That will probably come after. Thoughts though? I reckon it could be cute. I don't think there's any sub content where the sub is the one driving the encounters (until they aren't, in this case).
Couple of questions, too. The Nyrea identify boys as the members of their race that inseminate young with sperm sacs, right? Just holding eggs is not an exclusive trait to either sex. So how weird is it that she might call a male PC a girl? Is it feasible for her to have learned the difference (honestly, probably not because PCs are so diverse) since your initial meetings between the sexes for the sake of calling a player what they want to be called?
Also, I just reread the Princess bad end and now I'm less sure of the characterisation. She's entitled and demanding, so she probably wouldn't act nicely at all to someone she considers so far beneath her. Then again, if she considers you a member of her harem already maybe she does? Dunno, maybe I'll rewrite it to be harsher or to put more emphasis on learning your place.