Warming Lyric Up
1. Should be a space here.
Lyric > Sex > Blow You (Lyric is female if that matters)
2. Should be some noun here. Her 'head' or 'mouth' or 'lips' etc.
3. There's one too many 'her's in the scene. Though I wouldn't actually object to more Lyric's in the scene.
4. Should be 'to be able to handle' instead of 'to be handle'.
1. Should be a space here.
Lyric > Sex > Blow You (Lyric is female if that matters)
2. Should be some noun here. Her 'head' or 'mouth' or 'lips' etc.
3. There's one too many 'her's in the scene. Though I wouldn't actually object to more Lyric's in the scene.
4. Should be 'to be able to handle' instead of 'to be handle'.