Lobstoppers: a lobster tf

razor777

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May 12, 2017
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been a long time lurker on this forum and so just recently i decided to try my hand at writing something for tits. i figured i'd go with something that wouldn't cause me alot of headache like a transformation, i welcome all of you to provide me with criticisms and feedback with this, your help will certainly be appreciated as i plan on submitting this to fen once its done
link:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Hc3-KP-LQ8bPq8WoocbC0o5n096urixmYdWgsc6_f_I/edit?usp=sharing
Edit: completed appearance blurbs(01/11/21)
 
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TiTSFan

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Neat idea, I wouldn't mind the chance to have a Decapodian Steele. Two things I noticed when I looked at your Doc... One, stat boosts for the core stats are a no go, so you will need to remove that from the eyes tf. Two, is your color chances. In the wild, lobsters are mostly a muddy brownish green color, then increase in rarity to blue, red, yellow, multi colored, and albino. You may want to factor in all the natural colors before assigning percentages.
 

razor777

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May 12, 2017
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Neat idea, I wouldn't mind the chance to have a Decapodian Steele. Two things I noticed when I looked at your Doc... One, stat boosts for the core stats are a no go, so you will need to remove that from the eyes tf. Two, is your color chances. In the wild, lobsters are mostly a muddy brownish green color, then increase in rarity to blue, red, yellow, multi colored, and albino. You may want to factor in all the natural colors before assigning percentages.
thanks i wanted to make a tf that was more out there, that no one else has thought about doing, i got rid of the core stat boost and added more options for skin color based on your suggestion
 
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