Combat; Victory; Relax; Feelings (for Leothric)]
[Combat; Victory; Return of Leofric]
Should be 'her heart'when or if she speaks heart.
[Combat; Victory; Return of Leofric]
Should be 'losses' instead of 'loses'It isn't like her loses make her an incompetent warrior
Should either be 'at a near-ethereal ...' or it should be 'as a near-ethereal figure blocks ...'.The boom of a deep, whiskey-soaked voice draws your attention upward as a near-ethereal figure blocking out the sunlight.
Should be 'its' instead of 'is'her face has is full color and shine