Kiyoko Headpat ceremony Grammar+Bug 0.5.1

[BrotherArgus]

So my save state for this was
Champ: Champion of Keros
Kiyoko: in my party
Kinu: Inari Shoujo

So The bug is that when I return to Kiyoko's house with her in the party and proc the headpat ceremony event the text starts as though I have Hime Kinu but then changes halfway through to the correct Kinu.


Grammar time.

Scene 1

"that" should probably be "than"


"aheadpat" should probably be "a headpat"


"trowing" should probably be "throwing"


"are us" should probably be "is us"


Sentence should probably read "as with everything to do with these foxes,"

 

[BrotherArgus]

Scene 2

Sentence should probably read: "Shall we enjoy the rest of our day together, then?"


Double space


"took" should probably be "look"


Sentence should probably be "It sounds like the kind of occasion where you would..."

 

[BrotherArgus]

Scene 3

"o" should probably be "to"

 

[BrotherArgus]

Scene 4

"isn't" should probably be "doesn't"


Sentence should probably read "instead of keeping"


Sentence should probably be "position to do anything about us"


"make" should probably be "made"

 

[BrotherArgus]

Update: I procced this scene with Hime Kinu and the bug was reversed and it started with Inari.