Item Idea: Mothersaver (open to comments and suggestion)

[v.mum]

a J'ejune-made "Pharmaceutical Medication" designed originally for the Lapinara and primarily made from the Motherhusk, a less than sensational drug item by the name Mothersaver.

my first crack at something to write for tits, its an item transformative i've thought up while playing Tarkus on multiple occasion; Motherhusks are basically the only drug centered around pregnancy, after all, why wouldn't someone enjoy it?

the link here and above contains the basics for the item, but id be super grateful for comments and concerns, possible improvements, and any information about my first attempt of writing for the parser- if it's any good or not.

 

[Princess Bug]

Took a quick glance and made some suggestions. Very solid writing on a mechanical and conceptual level, looking forward to your future works if you choose to tackle bigger projects!

 

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Current speed multiplier is capped at 12 with incubator starter perk. Will be interesting to see if Fen will allow a bump up to 15 (16).

+ temporary pregnancy speed increase of 50% for 72 hours.

I am going to abuse the fuck out of this.

 

[v.mum]

Took a quick glance and made some suggestions. Very solid writing on a mechanical and conceptual level, looking forward to your future works if you choose to tackle bigger projects!

your comments and tips well noted! thank you for the revisions!