Is it just me or does the Milly content seem like it was written by a horny teenager?

[JakeFromStateFarm]

the way it flows, some of the wording, the pacing, it all seems like My first Smutfic™. I've read a lot of furry smut, both good and bad, it isn't bad per se, it just seems like it was written by an inexperienced writer.

i dunno. just voicing my thoughts.

 

[SmithEK]

the way it flows, some of the wording, the pacing, it all seems like My first Smutfic™. I've read a lot of furry smut, both good and bad, it isn't bad per se, it just seems like it was written by an inexperienced writer.

i dunno. just voicing my thoughts.

Milly is written by Fleep who wrote Lyla and the very hot demon lady duo. Definitely not inexperienced.

 

[JakeFromStateFarm]

Milly is written by Fleep who wrote Lyla and the very hot demon lady duo. Definitely not inexperienced.

huh. just seemed a bit "self insert" like.