[Patreon] Pride and Submission. Warning: Animated Sex scene Boy Love Slave Sim game.

Is the tentacle sex scene happens too fast, too sudden or it's ok

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redrain

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My game name is Pride and Submission. It is a visual novel/ dating sim game with lots of animations. Aside from blowjob, penetration, nipples, foot, it has beat (no blood), humiliation, slave, pet, male preg category. The game is not long and sex scene comes really fast, player don't have to wait too long.

I have completed over 12 series of animation in my game (it's too much so I have stop counting)

https://patreon.com/vivigame

||MALE PREG/ GROUP SEX
_if the prince pride and psyche <50 and you haven't activated Group sex, the event will never happens

_ After loose his virginity (the first time the monster's cock rams in the prince's asshole), if the prince said "Fuck off" 4 times (Which happens when water or food >50% and the monster still feed or water him), group sex event activated

_The giant monsters ask the monster "Can we shoot eggs in him?

" Why not?" > male preg "Ask the prince" >groupsex||

CHEAT TO BEAT THE GAME FAST
_If the prince's water>60, he will ask you to release him because he needs to pee.
_If you make him pee right there, his pride and mental will decrease by 10
_1 or 2 pee time and he will do everything in the sim menu

The game pc and android version are also on itch.io
https://vivi-rbi.itch.io/

Please check out my Patreon page if you like my game https://www.patreon.com/vivigame


Here is the game play video https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=ph5ccfc5ce3b41f
https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=ph5ce09cb9b7cfb

Here is some CG of the game animations
 

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My honest impression was that it was so-so. Phrases like 'face like a fag' and 'I'm not a homo' are 100% guaranteed to turn me off though. The tentacle sex itself was okay. I didn't think the pacing was off, but the writing could use some work and the animation didn't always match up with what was going on in the text, which threw me off a bit. I'd give it a 6/10, personally. I got hard briefly, but didn't stay that way till the end of the demo. Oh, and I strongly recommend picking an actual name for the game beyond 'yaoi' if you haven't already. Hope that helps.

Regarding the writing itself, I did see that you mentioned hiring an editor, which is good. I'm guessing English isn't your native language? Either way, you definitely need one, and as luck would have it I happen to be one and available for hire, even. Feel free to contact me if and when you're ready :).
 
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Yeah sure. Thanks you very much :))
Hey, if "face like a fag" and "I'm not homo turn you off, what turn you on? Which word or which situation?
The game name is Pride and Submission lol
Oh yeah, since which part you turn off? Is it before or after the tentacle sex scene? I was thinking might be because I make him completely nake so soon. Maybe I could put his cloth on at the tentacle sex scene.
 
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Well, I'm a gay dude, so I really *really* hate the word 'fag' and the whole 'turned straight guy' trope really doesn't do it for me. Also, CBT isn't a fetish I'm personally into, so that may have contributed? Either way, you probably could have drawn it out just a tad more, but again, when the text refers to specific actions (like the tentacles entering his ass) it threw me off that the animation didn't change to reflect that.
 
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@karunama lol, sorry. I don't actually understand what that word mean. I just saw it when watching porn. Yeah, I just edited the whole thing at the vine scene and make the animation better.
@Klaptrap Ok thanks
 
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One idea is to hire writers, for the future. A lot of early games don't take off/fail because the solo/few devs are against enlarging their workforce/outsourcing. In your case (being poor with English) I would advise considering this if your audience is English speakers.
 
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@BubbleLord Yeah, I will, thank you :)). I'm thinking of hiring an editor after everything finished because I might fix the script. "A lot of early games don't take off/fail" You mean there are people who can really success at early state? lol. That's cool
 
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I have finished fixing all the bugs i created for the game (lol) plus 2 endings: 1 with leeches+ anal and one no-sex ending.
Mostly everyone will get the heavy sex ending hehe
Anyone can jump right to the no-sex ending at the last Save/Load screen
The sim and ending still haven't got images/animations though. I'm currenly working on it. The grammar will be fixed soon.
The update version is above
 
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Can anyone tell me what details you like for blowjob? My animation will have deep throat, but I don’t know what to put before that. Hand job at the tip of the cock then suck ball and lick up then deepthroat and cum inside mouth?
 
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Lets see, if you want foreplay before the deepthroat proper, licking up the length of the cock and/or playing with/sucking on the balls are both good directions to go
 
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At the beginning of the game you have too few options to select. Until you hit around 69 psyche you can not do anything.

Also there is no motivation to take care of Ray. If you mess up feeding him or exhaust him extensively there should be a consequence and the game should end. You must learn to take good care of him. Heal him if you wound him or give him medicine if he gets sick etc.

If there were animations for other actions like fucking him; it would be much cooler.

I really liked the concept and enjoyed playing your game.
 
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@PurveyorOfSilentTopics Hey thanks a lot :)). I'm making blowjob animation. For sex, I have humiliation and sex choice. They included Humiliation: anal hook+ sword handle (completed), cock teasing (completed). For sex choice, I have blowjob, and penetration. For the consequence, if Ray faints, his psyche will increase by 1 (too little I think?). At first, the player cannot do anything if they make him faint all the time. Later, It's ok to do that.

Do you think the game need to be harder+ add more consequence? I intended to make the game super easy to play, and last from 20 to 30 mins with lots of animations.

I'll update the game file with added animations and the opening proofreading tonight. Thanks for your review. Heal and medicine sound cool. I'll think of a way to put it in. Especially heal.
 
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I think the game should be harder. It should be easy at first but should get harder the lower his psyche and pride is. Currently it is the reverse.

There could be random events like him getting sick etc. You can give him medicine then trick him into taking drugs to reduce his psyche but increase his pride because it gives him false courage. Rubbing could do the reverse: reduce his pride but increase psyche because it gives him relief. Do it too much and he will call you his cock rubber increasing both is pride and psyche.

Humiliation could reduce his pride but if you do it too much he may get used to it and begin mocking you instead. Some humiliation may require you to choose right options, answer question relating to his past correctly or be performed in some order.

You can use mind control to make him talk about his past and open up further humiliation options. Like comparing him to his brother and saying the king chose Ren because he was more of a man and probably had a bigger dick.

You can have the option to give him humiliating nicknames like: princess, ginger binger, limp wimp, monster sucker, fiend licker...

You could not give him water and tell him he can drink your cum instead. Starve him until he accepts anal etc. You can give him rewards that will increase his psyche but reduce his pride once he accepts regular sex.

A healthy human can live without water 1-2 days (up to 8). But can live without food for up to a month. 1-2 days of starvation has no adverse effects on health.

Possibilities are endless. The concept is unique and there is like nothing like it on the market. If this was a full game I would buy it.
 
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@PurveyorOfSilentTopics Hey, thanks a lot :)) Those are really great ideas. Very interesting! I'm planning taking donation to develop the game and release it for free. Now, I'll finish the core of the game first, show it to others and ask for donation to add a lot more. Your ideas are really good. I already use princess lol. Btw, if u don't mind. What is ginger binder?
 
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My update file of the game. The editing and facial expression is completed from the beginning till when the sim start. I have updated the sim mechanic to be easier at the start and added water, feed, tease ball, toy (sword handle and anal hook) animation.
I'll edit this download link above when I can. (I fix too much so I have to wait till tomorrow to edit)
https://www.mediafire.com/file/7yv4ek9vi0d3e7q/PrideAndSubmission-1.0-pc.zip/file
 
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I have added blowjob animation. There are total 4 series and 9 animations (lick, 2 suck balls, 3 version of deep throat from fail to success, 3 version of swallow cum from fail to success). The download file have been updated at the headline.
 
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Yeah, make sense. I just want to raise the hard level. Like if you fuck him too much, he faints lol. I'll take it out and see.
Oh yeah, I don't know if you have entered this event: whenever his Water stat >= 100, at the end of the day, something happens. If you don't like it, you have option to get out. It is a really pervert event in my opinion hehe
 
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Hey everyone, What position you like best for penetration? Do you think show the cock enters asshole for all penetration scenes is a good idea? Because if the asshole is showed, the character face cannot appeared in the front
 
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