[IMPLEMENTED] Paragon Power Armor

[ARC the Automaton]

Hi everyone! I am extremely new to writing for TiTS, so I decided to try out writing some items before I move on to anything major. The first of these items is the Paragon Hazard Armor, essentially armor that's worn by the hazard troopers you encounter during your team-up with Feruze! I thought that if you could get the cool augment-weave suits the cyberpunk mercenaries have then you should be able to get the armor of other enemies as well. Just posting this here for any critique before I submit it!
Relevant Google Doc here

EDIT: Halved the penalties to evasion (-12 to -6) and sexiness (-8 to -4) and changed the description slightly (replaced "and is only really sexy to hardcore armor fetishists." with "save for a vague outline of their curves.")

 

[Paradox01]

Evasion: -12
Sexiness: -8

Oof! I think what you should be going for is this...



...instead of this:



Having said that, I like what you have so far. You certainly have a much better grasp on the game than most folks.

 

[ARC the Automaton]

Fair enough lol
I guess maybe I overdid it when trying to balance out the boosts it gave.

I was comparing it to Behemoth Scale and the Linebreaker Universal Combat Kit when trying to determine stats but I think you’re right in that this is less Space Marine armor and more Sisters of Battle.