[Implemented] Paige Expansion Pack: A Threesome With Kiro!

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Hello! My name is B.

Link to the document: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ukFA6Lio7U1aI1R8OxtkF2td07K7uXvsHYpHc7r2of4

Way back when I first wrote Paige, I was even more ambitious than her final version turned out to be, and in order to save myself from the stress and headache and bloat that she was becoming, I had to shelf some of her promised features and content for later expansion packs. Among them was the promised threesome she could have with Kiro.

Now that Paige has been completed for a while, it's now time to finish what I promised I'd do. It's time for Paige, the tight-bodied, blind, furry Ausar yoga instructor on Tavros to fuck Kiro Tamahime, the Kui-Tan pirate packing more heat than just the guns on her ship!

This document is currently a work in progress: what I've completed so far is Paige and Kiro's talking topics. They were friends growing up and they have quite the history together; naturally, the old friends would want to catch up a little bit before jumping straight into the hanky-panky. It's all been reviewed by Fenoxo and it currently has his seal of approval: now it's just a matter of writing all that delicious threesome sex.

Spoiler: it's gonna involve more flowcharts. You'll decide at the start of the sex if you want the threesome to focus primarily on yourself; on Paige; or on Kiro, and then you'll have a bevy of options to choose from that initial choice. If you find flowcharts to be unbelievably sexy, you've come to the write expansion pack!
 
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Alabaster Chimes

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Not even a sex scene in this doc yet and I'm already attached to this doc on possibly an emotional level.

This is shaping up to be amazing.

(That line about Kiro.... Had to leave a comment on that one.)
 
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Dark67titan

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must admit didnt see this coming but why the hell not, also is it too much to ask for a kelly,kiro, paige and steele foursome some time after this?
 
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Not even a sex scene in this doc yet and I'm already attached to this doc on possibly an emotional level.

This is the exact moment you know a NPC is well-written.

God damn right! I've loved what I've read so far and ever teared up a little a few times, I just feel so damn good about it all!
 

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Here's a sneak peek at the threesome doc:



This is just to get people speculating. I have a .txt document for the notes on what each scene entails, but I'm not gonna post it because I need to keep the suspense somewhere.
 

XBoxMaster131

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Here's a sneak peek at the threesome doc:



This is just to get people speculating. I have a .txt document for the notes on what each scene entails, but I'm not gonna post it because I need to keep the suspense somewhere.
I like what I see! Keep it up, man!
 

Sogen

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Ooh, question for you B, will there be an option for those of us with multi-cocked Steeles to pen both the girls?
 

Xeivous

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Dicking the two of them when they're presumably in one another's arms makes me wonder if a tail-vag could get up to some sneakiness on Kiro's unoccupied cock.
 

Sogen

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Dicking the two of them when they're presumably in one another's arms makes me wonder if a tail-vag could get up to some sneakiness on Kiro's unoccupied cock.
Hmm, I hadn't thought of that. If you're dicking both of them then Kiro's monster is gonna be sandwiched between them (in prime double tit-job real estate no less) so when Kiro pops she's gonna hose both of them down, unless you've got a cunt-tail to cap the flow.
 

Ethereal Dragon

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opened pandora's box that's what... I'll add to the madness... tail cocks, parasite or non-parasite ones. I can't remember if it was you or another writer who said their character will have nothing to do with parasitic cock/vag tails :p Really though B write what you want to write, if your comfortable with what people suggest it's entirely up to you to do it. If you aren't then you aren't under any obligation to write it no matter how much people demand or cry for it.
 
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B

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I've recently completed a little over half the scenes for this expansion pack! I've completed the entire PC branch of the tree and I'm nearly finished with Paige's branch. I haven't begun Kiro's yet.

To celebrate me making it halfway through the sexy content, I've updated the public document with the Threesome talking topic, as well as the first subbranch of the PC branch of the tree, to whet your appetites.
 

B

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Hello! My name is B.

It is currently 7:30 AM in my timezone. I stayed up all night writing this expansion pack so that I can get it wrapped up and completed before I went to bed!

The document's been updated! It's completed, with something like 55 pages of porn. This project was pretty ambitious, less because of my strategy of making the scenes in smaller bite-sized chunks and more because making it about a threesome made all the options extremely involved. I would go more into detail, but I'm currently cross-eyed from lack of sleep.

I'll be submitting it immediately for Fen's review! Hopefully he doesn't go as nutty coding it as I did writing it.
 

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So, hey! 21 days later and we're in the game properly! Backers only for now, but the turn of the month is right around the corner, so this expack will be public before you know it. I hope you enjoy this threesome expack; 41,000 words of two of your favourite ladies fucking you and each other!
 

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So, hey! 21 days later and we're in the game properly! Backers only for now, but the turn of the month is right around the corner, so this expack will be public before you know it. I hope you enjoy this threesome I AM A BIG STINKY BRAIN expack; 41,000 words of two of your favourite ladies fucking CUCKING you!
 

Evil

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Are you butthurt because Kiro went up your butt?
 
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Darkpheonix

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I feel like I'm missing something here. Someone care to translate the meaning of I AM A BIG STINKY BRAIN or at least what it would mean in Zenitrh_xxx post?
 

Evil

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Cuckold, a derogatory term for the husband of an adulterous wife.
 

Darkpheonix

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Ah didn't know it was short for that. Now I get it.
 

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Wanted to make two quick notes - firstly, your writing is excellent as always, and secondly I noticed that some of the endings for the Kiro-centered path are different from the doc - I was wondering if you had any insight as to whether it was intentional or a mistake made in coding? Seems like the scene reverts to focus on Paige regardless of what happens beforehand.