I Have a few questions about a character I'm writing and I don't know where else to put them...

RoxieAdams

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Here are my questions...

1. Does TiTs have a place where characters could go dancing?
I'm writing a character and it would be cool if when Steele is picking them up, the new character asks if they wanna go dancing.

2. Would corporations like TamaniCorp have product testers?
As in to check that the new pocket pussy does not chomp your dong of before bulk shipment?

3. Whats the cutest race that can have small pure females that could be encountered at a bar? (not Kaithrit)
Just need something for my new character to fool around with as a one off. Originally had a Kaithrit but now my character is one so its a tad confusing

4. When is a good time to put something on the submission thread to be looked over...
I am currently at 20 pages written but i don't wanna write much more before some one gives me feed back...
 
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1. Not really. Lots of bars and a few strip clubs but not any place suited for dancing. You could also just make up a place for a single use scene.
3. I don't see why not.
2. Tove, Raskvel, Gabilani and Lapinara.
3. That's already way more than most people have before starting a thread. I think you'll be fine.
 
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1. Not really. Lots of bars and a few strip clubs but not any place suited for dancing. You could also just make up a place for a single use scene.
3. I don't see why not.
2. Tove, Raskvel, Gabilani and Lapinara.
3. That's already way more than most people have before starting a thread. I think you'll be fine.


Thanks a tone for the super quick reply and that helps with everything so also thanks for that
 

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1. Not really. Lots of bars and a few strip clubs but not any place suited for dancing. You could also just make up a place for a single use scene.
3. I don't see why not.
2. Tove, Raskvel, Gabilani and Lapinara.
3. That's already way more than most people have before starting a thread. I think you'll be fine.

@RoxieAdams

1. There's no reason why there shouldn't be and there most certainly are such places, no one has yet written a visitable place you can go and dance. Though you can attend a night club where you go to dance during the Poe A event.
3. Agreed
2. Toves are... for a lack of a better term asexual and don't have much in terms of sexual dimorphism. Raskvel and Gabilani are from a relatively recently discovered world and seeing them (especially raskvel) outside of Tarkus and it's vicinity would be rather rare
3. Again, agreed.

P.S. @RoxieAdams You are aware that the numbering of your questions is off (1,3,2,3), right?
 
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I'm writing a character and it would be cool if when Steele is picking them up, the new character asks if they wanna go dancing.
P.S. @RoxieAdams You are aware that the numbering of your questions is off (1,3,2,3), right?

For some reason that kinda reminded me of this...


To avoid derailing the thread though, I do agree with @NotYouNorI and @Klaptrap on their points.

Just need something for my new character to fool around with as a one off. Originally had a Kaithrit but now my character is one so its a tad confusing

Although on this point, it might be a good idea to kinda "view the bigger picture" if it comes down to making a new character. :p I mean in my view there wouldn't be anything wrong with seeing a fine kitty in a bar if I was one myself. (In fact I'd friggen love it admittedly.) Would be better to go off what you think or know are the interests of others when it comes to character creation, as well as your own! :) As long as you enjoy the character you are making yourself on top of that, everybody's happy that way! :D Of course its all ultimately your choice as well in the end of things so, just thought I'd throw that out there. :confused:
 
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Although on this point, it might be a good idea to kinda "view the bigger picture" if it comes down to making a new character. :p I mean in my view there wouldn't be anything wrong with seeing a fine kitty in a bar if I was one myself. (In fact I'd friggen love it admittedly.) Would be better to go off what you think or know are the interests of others when it comes to character creation, as well as your own! :) As long as you enjoy the character you are making yourself on top of that, everybody's happy that way! :D Of course its all ultimately your choice as well in the end of things so, just thought I'd throw that out there. :confused:


Its not that, its just when Steale Meets the character I'm writing there is Kaithrit sitting on her lap. I changed the Main written character to a Treated-Kaithrit, so now i need to replace the lap character with something else...

"In one of the less populated corners of the bar you see a huge curvy looking kaithrit sitting at a table. As well as her size you are also surprised by the two massive wings that sprout from her back. On her lap sits a cute Kaithrit. The table in front of them is decorated with empty Kui Creamer shot glasses. The dog girl is currently nuzzling her head into to the chest of the bigger women. The later pets the puppy girl between the ears almost protectively. Both women produce drunk girly giggles."

Gotta replace the second one with something
 

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Its not that, its just when Steale Meets the character I'm writing there is Kaithrit sitting on her lap. I changed the Main written character to a Treated-Kaithrit, so now i need to replace the lap character with something else...

"In one of the less populated corners of the bar you see a huge curvy looking kaithrit sitting at a table. As well as her size you are also surprised by the two massive wings that sprout from her back. On her lap sits a cute Kaithrit. The table in front of them is decorated with empty Kui Creamer shot glasses. The dog girl is currently nuzzling her head into to the chest of the bigger women. The later pets the puppy girl between the ears almost protectively. Both women produce drunk girly giggles."

Gotta replace the second one with something
Oooh, OK. The way you worded that kinda came off a bit weirdly but I understand now. Thanks for clearing that up :p
 

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Gotta replace the second one with something
Well, there are the three small races mentioned earlier even though using them have problems that NYNI has outlined - however, it's nothing that can't be p. safely ignored/handwaved if you'd really want a spess kobold/muppet/goblin character.

New options for you to consider:
A modded elf/fairy - always a great choice for a petite purefem.
A vildarii - basically, a devilish looking spess elves that can shapeshift.
A saeri - spess butterflies. Just look at Inessa (description more so than bust) for the example of how cute they can be.
A lapinara - p. small spess bunnies that need more love, according to lore. Your tiny can have being adopted from shelter as a part of her background, provided it fits.
A mouse girl - to round up the trio with doge and cat ladies. Can be modded or a member of that weird race Fen has mentioned somewhere.
 
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3: Would Korgonne fit this bill? I skimmed the in game codex and I could see a curious Korgonne girl sneaking or being invited into a bar.