In the post quest 3some with azzy and the queen, "Azyrran gasps and giggles while honey fills your nipples" should either be "fills your mouth" or "fills her nipples". not sure which.
In the same scene, "The ticklish tough of Azyrran’s tongue lapping at you hungrily is nothing to the heat suffusing your bone as Nyzerrah sinks onto you, not stopping until the two girls are practically kissing." I think tough is supposed to be tip?
"There’s a smugness to her face so rich you can practically see the confident smile on your face" something feels off here but im not sure what it's supposed to be