Very good stuff all around, but Elyrrin's post party event does have some mistakes here and there
-her naked bust doesn't show during sex
in the MommyDom scene:
-"give way to quite moans of pleasure" instead of "quiet moans"
-"thrusts her tongue into her" instead of "into it"
-"the plants her hands" instead of "then plants"
in the Bend Her Over scene:
-"You you continue" instead of just one "You"
-"push forward is all she need" instead of "needs"
-"tightens it coil around you" instead of "its coil"
-"enough to drive a man,girl wild" I'm guessing it's a parser mistake here, a "," instead of a "|"
-at the scene of Steele's climax, for some reason I get both the real cock and Hardlight strapon variants, despite my Steele having only a cock and no strapon
-"its efforts to empty internal nuts" instead of "its internal nuts"
-her naked bust doesn't show during sex
in the MommyDom scene:
-"give way to quite moans of pleasure" instead of "quiet moans"
-"thrusts her tongue into her" instead of "into it"
-"the plants her hands" instead of "then plants"
in the Bend Her Over scene:
-"You you continue" instead of just one "You"
-"push forward is all she need" instead of "needs"
-"tightens it coil around you" instead of "its coil"
-"enough to drive a man,girl wild" I'm guessing it's a parser mistake here, a "," instead of a "|"
-at the scene of Steele's climax, for some reason I get both the real cock and Hardlight strapon variants, despite my Steele having only a cock and no strapon
-"its efforts to empty internal nuts" instead of "its internal nuts"
