Halloweiner Dreams Contest Entries

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  1. Fenoxo

    Fenoxo Corrupter of Tainted Space
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    Aug 26, 2015
    Please contain all miscellaneous discussion to the comments in this blog post. This thread is for submitting entries only. Thank you.

    Last year we had a massive spook-contest with a massive spook-prize. This year, I'm going to do a smaller (but still spoopy) event where you can write something that gets in as a new dream sequence - and make a few bucks doing it! Check out da roolz:
    • Grand Prize: $100, Judge's Choice Entries: $50. Payout is done via paypal.
    • Entries should be written as a dream the player can experience while sleeping.
    • Entries should still be titillating in addition to Halloween themed. Despite the fact that there is a skeleton inside you RIGHT NOW, we don't want to spoop it the entire way out of your body.
    • Entries should consist of no fewer than 500 words.
    • No more than two entries per author.
    • All entries are to be posted in this thread.
    • If you want to write stuff targetted for CoC2, I’ll potentially pay out for those as well. Choose the game you like!
    • Please submit your entry by the end of Monday the 22nd.
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  2. Gundam-Knight-Chris

    Gundam-Knight-Chris New Member

    Oct 15, 2018
    Should we post the story on here or put it on file?
  3. Fenoxo

    Fenoxo Corrupter of Tainted Space
    Staff Member

    Aug 26, 2015
    Im not sure what you mean by "on file," but yes, post here.
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  4. Gundam-Knight-Chris

    Gundam-Knight-Chris New Member

    Oct 15, 2018
    So write up the story and then post it. Sounds simple enough.
  5. Gundam-Knight-Chris

    Gundam-Knight-Chris New Member

    Oct 15, 2018
    [This is part 1 since you gave us a 500 word count limit. I'll have part 2 up soon.]

    You awaken to find yourself on some sort of surgical table that smelled like blood and bodily fluids. It was hard to discern what the fluids might have been but you did not have a clear understanding on why you were here.

    There didn’t seem to be anyone present so you hopped off the table and immediately realized that you were completely naked. A cold, shiver runs down your spine and a feeling of vulnerability leaves you shaking like a leaf.

    “What do we have here?” A smooth, masculine voice spoke out, surprising you to the point you jumped lightly in fright.

    Fervantly, you scan the room to find the owner of the voice but all you could see was darkness and a pair of glowing red lights.

    ...Wait, red lights?

    Squinting your eyes, you notice the red pair of lights that shimmered in the shadows like warning beacons. Then the lights grew bigger and bigger until out stepped...a man? He looked to be average in stature but he possessed a well-toned body that was pale as a ghost. The red lights were actually a pair of crimson eyes that seemed to glow with ominous intent. He had neck-length raven black hair, an androgynous face, and only seemed to be wearing a jet black loincloth. Overall, you couldn’t help but gape in surprise. This man…looked just so beautiful.

    “I’ve not had a guest in my chambers for quite some time,” The man spoke, his velvet-laced voice sending an unprecedented warmth down your loins.

    “W-who are you?” You asked, timidly.

    He gives you a toothy smirk, revealing the pearly white fangs that struck a chord of fear in your soul. “I am the Void. The End. The Beginning,” The man strolled towards you in a slow, predatory manner that had you backing away until you bumped your ass into the surgical table. He stops directly in front of you, an indescribable look in his eyes as he stared into your own. “I am your master...and you are my pet.”

    Before you realize what the man meant, black tendrils emerged from the shadows and ensnared your limbs. You try to scream but another tendril is wrapped around your mouth, sealing your lips. The tendrils roughly place you back on the table, bent over and your rear present to this...demon.

    “Don’t worry,” The man assured you. You feel a cold yet arousing finger running along your spine then a hand slaps your right butt cheek. “It’ll only hurt...quite a lot.”

    You try to look back at your assailant and realize that he’s removed his loincloth, revealing a large, thick pasty human cock that pulsed with need. The very sight of it alone made you wet with envy and lust. You need it inside you. Right here. Right now!

    The demon seems to notice your look of need and smirks at you, “I figured a slut like you would need my cock. Very well, I shall give you your prize.”
  6. Gundam-Knight-Chris

    Gundam-Knight-Chris New Member

    Oct 15, 2018
    [Here is part 2. Now just a heads up, this dream is primarily for females, hermaphrodites, and cuntboys. Males or transexuals will not have this scene.]

    You eagerly spread your legs in obedience. Reason had long since left your lust-filled mind as you stared back at the crimson-eyed demon that played with your body like it was his toy.

    A sudden pressure forces a moan out of your throat as your new master presses the tip of his massive cock into your ass, threatening to split you in half due to its sheer size alone. Regardless, you eased your body as the monstrous cock pushed its way into your ass inch by pleasurable inch.

    “My, oh my,” Your master whispered in your ear. “I can feel the arousal within your body, mortal. And it smells...delightful. You are definitely going to be my favorite servant to please me.”

    All you could manage was a nod as the demon started thrusting into your ass with unrelenting vigor. It felt so good and you didn’t care how many times your master used your body. All you could think about was having his cock ram every hole you have and cumming on you, in you, or wherever.

    “Hm, it seems you’re eager for more,” The master proclaimed. He snapped his fingers then, surprisingly, the tendril around your mouth shifts until it presses past your lips and reshapes itself to form a thick phallic cock that you couldn’t help moan when you tasted how divine it was on your tongue.

    Your lust-addled brain couldn’t keep up with the number of times your ass or mouth hadn’t been fucked with a large cock. Your body naturally responded by sucking, thrusting, or squeezing to the point that you’ve become a cock-hungry slut.

    The master would occasionally switch from a different hole to fuck until they were left gaping and dripping with his pre-cum. He even backed out once to allow all of the shadowy tendrils to fuck or play with your body however they saw fit. You couldn’t keep up with the number of orgasms that each rapid or hard thrust had brought you until you could only think about having more and more of those wonderful cocks ramming inside your holes.

    Then the master sent his tendrils away, except the ones holding you down, and decided to fuck your cunt missionary-style. In between his thrusts, he would play with your nipples by pinching them or licking the areola. He even bites you on the neck. It hurts at first, but then it starts to feel good even when his tongue laps up your blood.

    Finally, you could feel your master’s cock jackhammer into your crevice. Loud, screaming moans leave your throat as you repeatedly call out to your master. “Cum! Give me cum! Please give me your cum, master!”

    A twisted smile appears on his human face and, for a brief second, you could see a demonic black face mix in with your master’s appearance. “As you so desire, you little slut!” He grasps your hips and thrusts his own violently against your dripping holes.

    A loud moan leaves your throat while your master releases a bestial roar as you both climax at the same time. His demonic sperm filling your womb to the point you look eight months pregnant.

    With the last of your energy spent, your consciousness begins to fade. However, your ears catch something from your master’s lips.

    “I’ll be seeing you soon...my pet.”

    Fen Feedback: Started in present tense and slid into past tense for seemingly no reason. Pick one. The tensing might be throwing me off, but it seems awkward in some places and relatively run-of-the-mill in others.
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  7. Foxxling

    Foxxling Well-Known Member

    Aug 28, 2015
    Foxxling's Halloweeny Dream

    I'm also going to do a spoopy one at some point. this one will also be getting another edit hopefully tomorrow.
    I'm also probably going to write a separate one for each of the cum filled status effects before Halloween that won't be contest submissions so there's that.

    Fen Notes: Fairly imperfect grammatically and sometimes repetitious in sentence structure. Nevertheless, they presented a unique and suitably unusual set of dreams for Halloween. I've gone ahead and coded the oral and anal variants, though I was out of patience for editing by the time I got to vaginal. Perhaps I'll chance to return to it in time.
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  8. Dvahime

    Dvahime New Member

    Oct 16, 2018
    I wish to make a submission.~

    I title it Hasshaku Halloween. I love a good lewd, yet slightly spoopy Hasshaku, so have at it!

    As well, I have an alternate version to it too, with a little bit of "Mommy's little trap" at the end. Hope you enjoy!

    Fen Notes:
    I had to disqualify this simply because I'm not cool with doing shota in my game.

    Po po po~
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  9. ThereWasanAttempt

    Oct 22, 2017
    Witch's Kitty

    A thoroughly smutty tale featuring a milky witch and her new pet kitty.

    Fen Notes: I really liked this one. Hot femdom mind control that fits the Witch & Cat theme of Halloween perfectly. My only critique is that the ending isn't quite suitable for a dream.
    Fen Notes: Paid!
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  10. hatchford

    hatchford New Member

    Oct 30, 2017
    Short version.

    And, because 500 words was nearly impossible: Long version.

    I'm ass ignorant and couldn't find a way to allow edits and comments so just allowed edits.

    Fen Notes: 500 was the minimum, not the maximum. It's a good thing you did a longer version. It was pretty solid. Not a lot of complaints, though the bit about her making you fuck your kids will need to be cut for use in game. Overall I quite liked it.
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  11. RickyRoo

    RickyRoo New Member

    Oct 17, 2018
    Well i tried complying with the 500 but found it to difficult so i wrote the Long Version here

    hope you enjoy and sorry if it doesnt make much sense first try at writting something like this

    Fen Note: I'm sorry but the grammar on this one was not up to snuff. I couldn't get the whole way through it.
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  12. Arthanos

    Arthanos New Member

    Oct 17, 2018

    I attempted to make the scene work with as many character types as possible.
    Edit: Looked in to how the parser works and updated the dream with correct parser inputs (I think).

    Fen Notes: Paragraph breaks, dude! This thing was a solid brick of text that slapped me in the face when I sat down to read it. Your sentences otherwise seem pretty clean.
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  13. Lupa

    Lupa New Member

    Oct 18, 2018
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  14. Frogapus

    Frogapus Champion Cocksucker

    Feb 21, 2016
    Oooh, I haven't submitted something in a while.

    How about getting molested by the hand-wall from Labyrinth? I'll also throw in a terrifying dream-witch that infects your codex, too.

    Because there's not enough horror-porn here.

    Hands (Kama-Tanha)

    500 words was the minimum, right?

    Fen Notes: Pretty excellently written stuff if not my usual cup of tea. Just the right amount of weird, though I am not adding a Codex entry that'll sit there locked all year for most folks.
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  15. Gardeford

    Gardeford Well-Known Member

    Aug 26, 2015
    Goblin dream!

    What would you do if you were a futa milf on halloween night and opened your door to 7 super hot college goblins? invite them in? But what if one ambushes you in the kitchen!? lets find out!

    Fen Note: I love this one. Good atmosphere and solid execution. There were a few grammar issues I bumped into like missing 's in contractions, but still very good. It honestly made me miss CoC's goblins a bit.
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  16. destinydies

    destinydies Member

    May 28, 2016
    Chastity Joy

    Anno's hidden dominant streak causes trouble when she meets Sera...

    If chosen, I can write the different paths into it! Don't really have the time to do it right now so I didn't, but its still a good chunk of words though. Would love any and all feedback! Feel free to comment on the google doc if you are so inclined or message me. Thank you very much!

    Fen Notes: I liked this one but wasn't a fan of locking so much of it in past-tense. It's jarring compared to the normal game's tense and would've worked better telling the events in presence tense with the occasional time-skips. I can't be the only one whose dreams sometimes bounce forward in time/place! It was also gated behind very particular conditions - knowing Kiro, crew Anno, intimate with Sera but not crew Sera, etc.
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  17. Jay123Desk

    Jay123Desk Member

    Aug 18, 2018
    Halloween Ghost Goo Thing

    The title is still a work in progress but basically it's a story about some ghost/goo bimbo that comes to your cabin and messes with a pregnant Captain Steele and it's kind of spooky but also kind of sexy. And you give a blowjob and there's sort of some implied possession rebirth stuff. It's weird. Went a bit overboard in length but I hope that I worded it right so that there will be minimal coding needed because it is written so that it can accommodate almost any Steele, male, female, pregnant or not!

    Fen Notes: This one also seems to struggle to stay in a single tense. I see paragraphs that have both present and past tense active within them. There's a few typos, but nothing that would disqualify. It's mostly a victim of its tense issues and length - if it were a smaller/tighter thing I might be more tempted to polish it myself.
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  18. H3X

    H3X New Member

    Jul 10, 2018
    I don't know how to have URLs look different than the actual link, but there's my entry. It's called Pumpkin Patch "Nightmare". It's about a particularly pent up pumpkin patch that uses the PC to get off. I wanted to make it "not just your average tentacle scene", so there's a bit of craziness in there. Cuz dream, that's why. This is my first serious writing attempt, but I still tried to have branching options for various genital setups and I used the parser commands as best I could. Editors/reviewers welcome! This was entirely (and painfully) typed up on mobile, so there's bound to be typos or autocorrects I missed. The doc should allow comments, please let me know. Thanks for reading!

    Fen Notes: The concept of this one is a good and VERY appropriate event to happen around Halloween. It reminds me a bit of the old Fera one I did for CoC that involved a bit of pumpkin-fukken. I encountered a fair few awkward lines that needed tweaking and some grammatical errors that held it back, but overall left with a positive impression.

    Also please use two line returns or indents on your writing to break up your paragraphs for easier reading!
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  19. GothPastel

    GothPastel Well-Known Member

    Jan 6, 2017
    Some gay shit idk
    It's like 500-600 words of the PC dreaming about getting fucked by some sorta vampire/werewolf duo.
    There's no bloodplay don't worry.
    Not my best work, but you know.

    Fen Note: Seriously, why doesn't anyone use indents or a proper amount of line returns? A little on the short side but perfectly acceptable for a dream. Grammar seems rock-solid, and while gay-vampire-bonings aren't my thing, Fendick approves. :thumbs_up:
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  20. G00d L0s3r

    G00d L0s3r New Member

    Jul 10, 2017
    Not the best, but as a beginner I think this is as far as I can go... for now. It is not as good as I wanted it to be, and it is not as Halloween-esque as I wanted, but cope with me, please.

    Google Drive link → Halloween Dream ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

    Now I am going to ponder on my mistakes, so that I can make my comeback on the next event :3. Bye o/

    Fen Note:
    While I hate to be the voice of negativity, this is not up to par grammatically. Sorry.
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  21. Linarahn

    Linarahn Well-Known Member

    Jan 6, 2017
    Here's my monster for the season!

    I'm mainly doing this for fun since I actually don't have PayPal (can't make an account, for reasons), so if I should win anything, I'll gladly take a commission instead or something.

    Anyhow, as long as at least one person likes it, I'm happy enough!

    Fen Notes: I liked this one, though it felt kind of dense and at times, perhaps a little rambling? Only a little, though. Grammar was overall solid, though variant passages could have screwy punctuation consistency that needed cleaning up.

    Edit: ! I can't believe it! I'm SO SORRY for anything I screwed up, I did this in the wee hours in some kind of mad sprint. I feel all kinds of warm and fuzzy now~
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  22. Lkynmbr24

    Lkynmbr24 Well-Known Member

    Oct 30, 2016
    Welp, here's my try at writing a dullahan gal that you can meet in your dreams! Hopefully it's good enough to at least make it in, and good luck to everyone else as well! (Might be a little sloppy since I finished dead in the middle of the night, and will proofread when I'm more awake... though a headstart from a generous soul is always nice!)

    Dullahan Spoopy Times!

    Fen Notes: Not bad, but the spoop goes on a little long for my tastes. Halloween dreams are probably the only time I'm going to give Dullahans a free pass. It was a risky write, but you pulled it off.
    Fen Notes: Paid!
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  23. Parnast

    Parnast New Member

    Oct 15, 2018
    I've never actually tried to write smut before. Hopefully you guys find it enjoyable enough. I call it;

    An Engine Encounter

    A movie-inspired encounter with a creature never recorded once in over 300 surveyed worlds. (hint-hint) It's roughly 3000 words. I tried writing different options for different kinds of players. The doc's structured so that you should hopefully be able to tell what option plays when. If you're not a fan of anal or weird oral, this is your warning.

    I don't know if I can ask this here, but if anyone reading it has any comments/criticisms/suggestions, I'd love to hear them. I'd like to try writing more stuff for the game in the future, and feedback on my writing would help.

    Fen Note: It's kind of chunky in places and has more than a few grammatical slipups that'll keep me from giving it a full read through. I did dump some edits in the first few paragraphs to give you an idea what I mean. TBH there's probably more adjustments I'd make, but I didn't want to spend too much time when there's so much to review today.
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  24. Zerva

    Zerva Well-Known Member

    Mar 25, 2016
    I'm no stranger to smut and ERP but making an event for a game was a fun exercise, here you go (just in time) my Dullahan Dream! (Dull Dream for short/puns)

    Criticisms and such are of course welcome, I've not done this type of thing before, thanks for any readings!


    Fen Note: Probably would've dropped some edit suggestions in this one if perms for that were enabled, but it wasn't an option. Little rough around the edges for me.
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  25. OhrenjPeelz

    OhrenjPeelz New Member

    Oct 22, 2018
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  26. TheMightyQuinn

    TheMightyQuinn New Member

    Oct 22, 2018
    Well, I figured I may as well put what I came up with out here. I... kinda ran a little wild.

    -Assumes character is male and has a penis.
    -Character probably should have lost anal virginity by this point, although I suppose it technically still makes sense if they haven't.
    -I wrote plaintext. Since I hadn't actually found the styleguide yet (whoops...), I used *markdowm style formatting* rather than <i>html formatting.</i> So yeah, I'm not injecting emotes everywhere, those are italics. Or they're supposed to be, at least.

    So here's my submission, since that's out of the way.

    Fen Note: Yeah the *'s are definitely something we don't use at all in game. I reworked it here and there. The concept is cool and interesting, though going with a lactating male was an... interesting choice. I would've preferred a herm/dickgirl for that route personally. Overall I liked it. Good work.
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  27. Frogapus

    Frogapus Champion Cocksucker

    Feb 21, 2016
    Oh wait, we're, allowed two entries!

    I don't know if this is allowed, but I wrote a monster encounter last year that didn't get picked, so I stripped it down to a dream encounter.

    Enjoy a dream of a horrific tentacle monster!


    Fen Note: Look, I'll use it, but I'm not going to a pay out for an entry that wasn't written for this contest. Just like how last year I wouldn't pay out for it because it was an entry written for a different submission long before the contest even started. Double-recycled entry no bueno.

    Frog note: Oh yeah, that's totally fine. At this point it's more about not having the encounter go to waste.
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  28. Layeofthedead

    Layeofthedead New Member

    Oct 22, 2018
    Hey I've always wanted to try my hand at writing a few things for this game, especially since I adore it so much. However I really can't make heads nor tails of how you're supposed to actually use the style guide so i tried to write a submission with minimal player activity. I kept the players pronouns neutral (they, them, and their) since i don't now the call outs outs and such. I'll have to take a weekend and actually try to figure it out however because i'd like to actually write out a bigger piece if people like the concept of this. it's around 1000 words and mostly focuses on Saendra, tho Anno and Azra get a little bit of lewd too. Anyway, I hope you enjoy!


    Fen Note: Wrong tense for use in game.
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  29. Violent Knight

    Oct 10, 2017
    Here's my entry for this year:

    Trial of the Captive Demon

    Written with CoC2 in mind, but could work for TiTS as well I suppose.

    TL;DR: Moar demonic sex, because there actually isn't that much of it in the original CoC outside the main story route, and everyone knows that route that can bring undesired consequences... Also: because I'm really into that shit. Edit: And no, imps don't count.

    This wound up getting much bigger than originally intended, so use as you see fit.

    The player can pick from four routes: succubus, incubus, herm or cuntboy, focusing mostly on you giving oral sex for a change. The four routes share many similarities, but each has its own spin. I've included small variations for Bro and Bimbo PCs, though more of the former, since I'm not very good at writing bimbo scenes (accepting ideas). I haven't had time to play CoC2 yet, but I'm assuming Bro Brew and Bimbo Liquor are staying, since they were favorites of mine in CoC.

    Fen Note: I passed this one to the CoC2 team to look at. I'll update when I know more~!
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  30. Evandill

    Evandill Member

    Sep 27, 2015
    Boarding Pack

    A dream in which the PC is at the center of a werewolf gangbang!
    Contains: buttfucking, faceriding, All males (though one of 'em has a vagina), and 2 cocks in one hole.

    Fen Note: I was really put off by the surprise female man-wolf. Not really my thing, so I sent this over a team member who is into dude-gina and werewolves... like... a lot. She seemed to like it, but points out that the fourth werewolf just kind of disappears. I also picked out a few small grammar issues. With some good editing it could be polished up.
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