The bug: no [Leave] button once you start talking to her, unless that's intentional. (I'm not sure if defeating her and just not having victory sex would be an option, but usually I think these have the option to walk away before that?)
The typos: For starters, the option to track her down says [Persue] and not [Pursue]. And in the [Gate?] option,
The typos: For starters, the option to track her down says [Persue] and not [Pursue]. And in the [Gate?] option,
there's a space missing between "your" and "view".