[English] [RPG MAKER] [Visual Novel] Familiars Training

[Exeryon]

Hey guys, this is my second game.

Like I wrote in the Bimspread post, my first game is suspended but I found another artist that wanted to work with me so, from this new collaboration, here my new game that for be clear is a parody game in the world of Zero No Tsukaima

SUMMARY
You are the illegitimate son of a noble and for this reason you are born as mage but spent your life without know it.
One day Old Osmond notice you and offer to let you enter the academy as new student and learn magic like anyone else but one day, during your familiar summoning, you summon a strange woman with a crystal in the chest.
The night of the cerimony you have a strange dream where a self proclamed demon god explain to you that you summoned one of his familiars that will grant you the chance of make your own harem.

SCREENSHOT

TAGS
- Harem
- Big breasts
- Mind Control/Brainwashing
- Visual novel like made with rpg maker mv (this is even something for a tag?)

LINKS
- Current Version V0.15: https://mega.nz/#!fAw1HQTI!sr6mZ6N9rqoOYJ09eyyYAIKk9Ow8SY9MMrhP2enIU9k
- My patreon page: https://www.patreon.com/user?u=3340508
- My mail: exeryonyorandros@gmail.com
- My artist patreon page: https://www.patreon.com/Waifuholic
- My artist HF page: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/Waifuholic/profile

NOTE
- The game use as base Zero No Tsukaima but have characters from other series inside
- This game is particular because I let you players decide things via polls infact the base world was decided by a polls made on my patreon page, this polls are open to all so even not patron can express their preference
- Since I'm terrible on take screenshot I normally wait that someone else do them for then copy and use them
- I don't have problems on you players post my game on other forums and sites, just put a link of my patrons page
- For various reasons I can't check anytime I want this post so if you want to ask me something post here and wait or use the mail I putted in the link lists

 

[Exeryon]

Edited with 2 screenshot

 

[xyzabc198]

Okay, as an English man myself, I had a huge issue reading your post so decided to slightly improve it for you:

Like I wrote in the Bimspread post, my first game is suspended but I found another artist that wanted to work with me so, from this new collaboration, here is my new game that is clearly a parody game in the world of Zero No Tsukaima

SUMMARY
You are the illegitimate son of a noble and for this reason you are born as mage but spent your life without knowing it.
One day Old Osmond notices you and offers to let you enter the academy as a new student and learn magic like anyone else, but one day, during your familiar summoning, you summon a strange woman with a crystal in her chest.
The night of the ceremony you have a strange dream where a self proclaimed demon god explains to you that you summoned one of his familiars that will grant you the opportunity to make your own harem.

NOTE
- The game uses Zero No Tsukaima as it's base but it has characters from other series aswell
- I let you players decide things via polls, infact, the base world was decided by polls made on my patreon page, these polls are open to everyone, so even non-patrons can express their preferences
- Since I'm terrible at taking screenshots, I normally wait for someone else to do them for me, and then copy and use them
- I allow anyone to post my game on other forums and sites, just put a link to my patreon page
- For various reasons, I can't check this post all the time, so if you want to ask me something post here and wait, or use the mail I put in the links list.


The grammar is certainly not perfect, but it should be easier to read than what you previously had

 

[xyzabc198]

With that out the way, time for a question. Soooo...you put big breasts as a fetish in the game, and I can obviously see from the pictures that big breasts is a big thing in the game, but are there going to be women with average sized, or even small sized breasts too? cuz I like the art-style, but stupidly big breasts just don't do it for me :S

 

[asestado]

With that out the way, time for a question. Soooo...you put big breasts as a fetish in the game, and I can obviously see from the pictures that big breasts is a big thing in the game, but are there going to be women with average sized, or even small sized breasts too? cuz I like the art-style, but stupidly big breasts just don't do it for me :S

I would say absolutely because in the kirche screenshot he talked about Tabitha, which is a flat girl .

I only hope that the mind control thing doesn't affect for example Kirche aggressiveness, in the original series she was kind of a predator of sex, so it would be funny being her prey haha.

P.D: Wait, I saw in another forum that he said that he won't make flat chested girls, Hmm, Tabitha with breasts?, too strange for me.

 

[buffmuffin]

*sigh*...

Again, massive, outlandish tits...

Hopefully, your game-world has excellent health coverage for the re-constructive surgeries these poor characters are going to need to ever walk upright.

 

[Yamemai]

I would say absolutely because in the kirche screenshot he talked about Tabitha, which is a flat girl .

I only hope that the mind control thing doesn't affect for example Kirche aggressiveness, in the original series she was kind of a predator of sex, so it would be funny being her prey haha.

P.D: Wait, I saw in another forum that he said that he won't make flat chested girls, Hmm, Tabitha with breasts?, too strange for me.

*sigh*...

Again, massive, outlandish tits...

Hopefully, your game-world has excellent health coverage for the re-constructive surgeries these poor characters are going to need to ever walk upright.

There was a poll on his Patreon about breast size of the characters, so blame the fan-base.... which came about due to the prior game, but still .

Anyways, anyone else getting an undefined function error? And/or know how to fix it? Can't get pass the disclaimer cuz of that.

 

[Exeryon]

A couple of things about me and the game:
1) @xyzabc198 I'm italian so english is not my native language, irony is that despite I don't have problem on understand it (write)

2) @asestado sorry but tabitha is not planned... if players will want her than she will appear otherwise no, if you know the series then you have to take under consideration that if I put Tabitha in the game then I have to put her familiar too... not that I dislike the idea...

3) @buffmuffin this projects is basically an experiment where I let decide various things to you players so if you don't like the result is not my fault since I'm giving to you all what the majority want, the majority decide big & absurd size breasts then they will appear

4) @Yamemai, is nice see that there are people that look at it... about your problem, into another forum someone said to had the same problem so I asked help to a programmer friend of mine and he said that is like is missing a runtime or something similar and at the question if it was a problem of the build or of the computer used he said "normal windows idiocy", the only thing that I can tell you is to wait the next release where I'll start to do Win and Mac builds and see if one of them will work

 

[Yamemai]

4) @Yamemai, is nice see that there are people that look at it... about your problem, into another forum someone said to had the same problem so I asked help to a programmer friend of mine and he said that is like is missing a runtime or something similar and at the question if it was a problem of the build or of the computer used he said "normal windows idiocy", the only thing that I can tell you is to wait the next release where I'll start to do Win and Mac builds and see if one of them will work

Yeah, that was me, at least one of them; that's kind of odd, since MV doesn't use runtime, or none that I know of; anyways, will do, and hopefully that'll fix it, thanks.

Btw, just looked at the SS, and Lust's waist looks kinda deformed, Eg. Too small vs hips and chest, if it didn't cave in and the line from the rib flowed to the hip part, it'd look better, imo.

 

[Exeryon]

About Lust waist I can only say that I'll pass your comment to Waifuholic and see what he'll say about it