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1. Should be 'throne's' with an apostrophe 's.
Marissa
2. I think 'Lady Light' is a title for Lumia, in which case 'light' would be capitalized. It's possible they're just saying "Lady, light forgive me!" but that would require a comma.
It looks more like they're using a title, though.
Tabitha
3.
I think 'Lady Light' is a title for Lumia, in which case 'light' would be capitalized. It's possible they're just saying "Lady, light be blessed!!" but that would require a comma.
It looks more like they're using a title, though.
4. This should be a comma instead of a period.
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5. 'pent-up' instead of 'pent up'.
6. 'rip-roaring' instead of 'rip roaring'.
7. 'women's' with an apostrophe 's.
1. Should be 'throne's' with an apostrophe 's.
Marissa
2. I think 'Lady Light' is a title for Lumia, in which case 'light' would be capitalized. It's possible they're just saying "Lady, light forgive me!" but that would require a comma.
It looks more like they're using a title, though.
Tabitha
3.
I think 'Lady Light' is a title for Lumia, in which case 'light' would be capitalized. It's possible they're just saying "Lady, light be blessed!!" but that would require a comma.
It looks more like they're using a title, though.
4. This should be a comma instead of a period.
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5. 'pent-up' instead of 'pent up'.
6. 'rip-roaring' instead of 'rip roaring'.
7. 'women's' with an apostrophe 's.
