[Editing Needed] Berwyn Pregnancy Content

[HugsAlright]

Hello, it's me.

I was hoping this would be a surprise and just pop up in an update on the blog some day, but BerwynPreg needs some edited and someone suggested I come to the forums for proofreading.

Any help is appreciated and I hope you enjoy my writing.

Thank you,

Hugs

BerwynPreg: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aWOOVKLmOu2Cwj7RIhyj3OvP4jxfuvDP1s6yLi1APKU/edit?usp=sharing

 

[valkyr42]

Great to see you again! It all looks good except for the two tiny grammar edits I made, and I personally would be delighted to see this get in-game.

 

[Malidica]

Well, i went through the entire document, added notes where applicable and tried to touch up a bit of the flow and grammar. I hope it helps. Pretty solid work to begin with Hugs. Feel free to message me about anything, my edits are under the name 'Andrakis'.

 

[Shrike675]

Cool story, and necro bro.