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ClockworkPenguin
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Just some small gramatical errors and/or typos I spotted while reading the Daliza 'treasury' scene as a dragon.
1.) tail, you lay your bailiff
Daliza's cheeks flush, and she bites her lip. With a flick of your tail, you lay bailiff on her back and spread her legs. There's no resistance in her at all, just a horny smile as you pounce on her, grabbing her wrists and pushing her down into the treasure pile. You kiss all over Dal's neck and shoulders, then her breasts, pressing your face into her chest. The silk dragons on her lingerie compress around your cheeks, and her legs wrap around your hips, pulling you tight against her cool body. The bed of coins beneath you both shifts noisily, flattening as you press Dal down into the opulent wealth of your hoard.
2.) you flip her
Your hands grab Daliza's hips, and you fip her from sitting to laying out on her back again, while you lunge up her supple body. The haft of your prick slaps into Daliza's face, rubbing from cheek to lip "A hoard exists for the pleasure of its dragon," you remind her. "Worship me."
1.) tail, you lay your bailiff
Daliza's cheeks flush, and she bites her lip. With a flick of your tail, you lay bailiff on her back and spread her legs. There's no resistance in her at all, just a horny smile as you pounce on her, grabbing her wrists and pushing her down into the treasure pile. You kiss all over Dal's neck and shoulders, then her breasts, pressing your face into her chest. The silk dragons on her lingerie compress around your cheeks, and her legs wrap around your hips, pulling you tight against her cool body. The bed of coins beneath you both shifts noisily, flattening as you press Dal down into the opulent wealth of your hoard.
2.) you flip her
Your hands grab Daliza's hips, and you fip her from sitting to laying out on her back again, while you lunge up her supple body. The haft of your prick slaps into Daliza's face, rubbing from cheek to lip "A hoard exists for the pleasure of its dragon," you remind her. "Worship me."