Crew interactions in the ship

4rm4ld0

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Most of the time the crew members are doing their things by themselves without interacting with one another. I was thinking if it would be okay to write entries where two or more of the crew do something together. It's a fairly small amount of text, so even people with no experience in writing can manage, and in my opinion it breath live into the characters.

Eitan is the character I'm interested in doing, there is a surprise amount of crew mates I can think he would have interest in talking or helping. Here is one I did with Eitan and Olympia as a example(and possible prototype):


You can see Eitan and Olympia in the AREA OF THE SHIP(probably the Engine Room or Cargo), the Milodan is carrying what appear to be an impossible huge piece of metal, trying to keep up with the brilliant gynoid in front of him. The duo chat timidily as you watch, judging by the amount of times the milodan nod you would think Olympia is explaining how whatever he is carrying work. It looks important, you make a mental note to ask her later.


What do you guys think?
 

4rm4ld0

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Well, so far that is what I got so far:

Eitan and Olympia:

You can see Eitan and Olympia walking into the [Engine Room*], the milodan is carrying what appear to be an gigantic metallic contraption while trying to keep up with the brilliant gynoid in front of him. They talk timidly mostly she does and Eitan nods, judging by how many times he does that you think Olympia is explaining how whatever he is carrying work. It looks important, you make a mental note to ask her later.

* Can be any room, I figure the ER is where Olympia stays the most so it seems more logical.
I change the size of the stuff he is carrying, didn't made much sense for something "impossible huge" to fit inside the ship.



Eitan and BESS/Siegewulfe:

Eitan is in the [Ship storage room*], his massive frame makes the small corner where your companion droid recharge looks even smaller. At the moment [Siegewulfe Name] sat in that corner connected to your ship through a socket. In your culture it is creep to watch somebody sleep but here you know better, even without seeing his face you can tell the Alpha eyes are full of wonder not malice, you imagine the VI sleeping in front of him must be something right out fantasy book to the burly milodan, if they have these. You giggle to yourself, perhaps your ancestors had a similar reaction when the Ausar opened the gates.

* I don't know where the Siegewulfe stays and as they don't occupy a room I used the storage room.
I imagine a synth would be something borderline magical for the milodan something like Pinocchio would be to us. The interaction I wrote make more sense for the Siegewulfe but I did a BESS variant too:

Eitan is in [Bess Name] quarters, his massive frame makes the small corner where your sex droid recharge looks even smaller. At the moment [Bess Name] stand in that corner connected to your ship through a socket. In your culture it is creep to watch somebody sleep but here you know better, even without seeing his face you can tell the Alpha eyes are full of wonder not malice, you imagine the AI sleeping in front of him must be something right out fantasy to the burly milodan, if they have these. You giggle to yourself, perhaps your ancestors had a similar reaction when the Ausar opened the gates.



Eitan and Yammi:

In your ship kitchen you spot Eitan and Yammi. Spread in front of him is a whole rainbow of shapes and colors from at least a dozen delicacies all carefully prepared by the sparatti Chef at his side. Eitan taste each alien dish with gusto always voicing his opinion on each one before proceeding to the next, an unnecessary deed it seems as his body language leaves no doubt of how good they taste. Yammi for her part can hardly conceal her smile, a big milodan comes with a big appetite perhaps one just as big as her own culinary creativity, you have no doubt both crew mates will have a lot on their plate for quite a while.

Uveto has snow, snow and snow. If his quest is anything to goes by the milodan probably would love some different kind of food, I imagine he would visit the ship kitchen quite often specially if Yammi is crew.


Eitan and Nova(gray goo armor):

A odd sound echoe throught your ship, the monitor reveal a scene just as odd as the source, in the milodan quarters Eitan parade in a silvery gray colored tutu, it looks surprisely confortable despite how much his bulging physique is stretching the diminutive attire, his roar like laugh mixed with a mischiveous feminine giggle form a odd joyuos duet. You briefly scan the room but before you can pinpoint anyone else the mystery solve itself, Eitan tutu start shaking until it suddenly grow a head, [Goo armor name] head briefly talk something into the milodan era before morphing again, this time she turn into a long sleeved trench coat with a fedora over his head, the alpha tries to hold a stern face but soon fall prey to [Goo armor name] contagious laugh again, you manage to hold a laugh. This time.

The one I had most fun writing, Eitan likes alien clothes and Nova is a sentient one. Perfect fit!

I decide against going lewd since lewd stuff is more fit for when Steele visit his crew, I did however intent to write one of Ramis and Eitan doing a push up competition in her room turned gym with Shekka masturbating in the background, but I felt it was a bit too early to do it since I don't even know if these two-crew interaction will make into the game a three one seems too ambitious at the moment, I also not sure if they are grammatically correct since my English is kind of rusty.

If anyone has suggestions of what I could change to make it more fitting for the game and what I could do next to make it actually into the game feel free to comment =)
 
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