Finished the Mating Press document. I made notes on any typos, suggestions, or likely spots to input some magicock or dark knight parsers.
My apologizes, I wanted to make sure each pregnancy stage had content and each scene had distinct variations.
I know the reason. As an editor who gets anywhere from $0.01 to a jaw-dropping $0.02 a word (usually $0.015) depending on document length and technical/lore/rules knowledge required, I am just saying that while making duplicate sections as opposed to a template section with [pregStage] parsers just used for the variants might seem easier to read and see the difference, it'll save you lots of money, like... maybe even $10. You can use the Highlight Text option to set the different parsers off in color to make them easier to ... well... parse.
Aside from that, it tends to burn out editors when they have to not only reread sections after corrections, but have to reread (nearly) identical sections, which tend to have all the same typos and issues and such. Obviously nothing to be done about it here, but just saying having one section with
'You reach and press your hand to Clementine's [clementime.pregStage 0 2 3 4|trim|slightly-curved|full and rounded|impressively gravid] tummy.' will save you both cash, and editor burn-out (and keep the sections consistent in case an error isn't pointed out in the third mirror section like it was in the first two times around).
Anyhoo, I hope it helps. Let me know if you need another look through.