Scene: Nahleen Mating Ball
The male huffs his enjoyment as his trailing fingers find your aquamarine pussy; he takes a moment to line himself up, in the next pushes his double cocks into both your cunt and your tight back passage.
Problem: I think this part of the sentence is mistyped. "In the next pushes" dosent sound right.
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Scene: Sydian Queen - Gang Bang scene
His hands find your shoulders, and his grip tightens as you advance your lips further down his shaft, filling your mouth with the shamefullyarousing taste and texture of cock.
Problem: needs a space.
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Scene: Botheric Blowjob
They lift themselves off you and leave silently. You're too exhausted and unfocused under the fuzz of bothri-oil to do anything but lie there and doze for a little while.
Problem: Missing a "c" at the end of Botheric.
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Scene: Nyrea Loss scene
...about wrapping her big, milky tits around your prick and humping away with her entire body does she actually stop, looking up at your incredulously.
Problem: missing a word between "your" and "incredulously"
The male huffs his enjoyment as his trailing fingers find your aquamarine pussy; he takes a moment to line himself up, in the next pushes his double cocks into both your cunt and your tight back passage.
Problem: I think this part of the sentence is mistyped. "In the next pushes" dosent sound right.
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Scene: Sydian Queen - Gang Bang scene
His hands find your shoulders, and his grip tightens as you advance your lips further down his shaft, filling your mouth with the shamefullyarousing taste and texture of cock.
Problem: needs a space.
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Scene: Botheric Blowjob
They lift themselves off you and leave silently. You're too exhausted and unfocused under the fuzz of bothri-oil to do anything but lie there and doze for a little while.
Problem: Missing a "c" at the end of Botheric.
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Scene: Nyrea Loss scene
...about wrapping her big, milky tits around your prick and humping away with her entire body does she actually stop, looking up at your incredulously.
Problem: missing a word between "your" and "incredulously"