Multiple typos over several NPCs and scenes.
NPC: Ari - Love Stars
Scene by: Fr0sty
"Where to start... Well I'm Ari, obviously, and I'm also Green-Star in the Love Starz, also obviously." She scratches her chin, her tail flicking being her as she thinks. "I also live here, again obvious, I know."
Problem: i think "being" is meant to be "behind"
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Poe A: The masquerade
NPC: Holiday - Black Cat
Scene by: Adjatha
"The crate containing the black cat cases has [been] pried open, but none of the contents seem to have been disturbed."
Problem: Missing word. Add "been"
Poe A: Black Cat Cont.
"Her shoulder(s) slam back against the wall and she opens her mouth in an 'O' of surprise as you mercilessly fuck her tender cleavage."
Problem: "shoulder" needs to be a plural. +1 "s"
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NPC: Jade - Dumpling Scene
Scene by: Altair Hayes
"You walk into Fur Effect, only to find the whole place empty save for a one of Jade's legs, which promptly disappears into the employee room, chased by tittering laughter."
Problem: got an extra "a" in there. Should probably remove it.
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NPC: Vaande
Scene by: Zeikfried
"Her thighs are your next target in your impatient sojourn to her pussy, quivering under the rape of your lips."
Notice: this one isn't a typo more of a quarry.
Im not sure if "rape" was the intended word but the scene plays as one of consensual interaction, rape usually implies non-consensual. For the sake of consistency shouldn't a different word be used?
It dosent really matter to me, I just wanted to bring it to your attention.
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NPC: Carrie - Male Milker - overload.
"Streams of semi-clear spray out from the tiny pinprick holes, rapidly increasing in size."
Notice: im not sure if this one is actually a typo considering it from a descriptor tag.
But if the PC has Gabliani Cum, Its Descriptor is Semi- transparent/clear and in several scenes across the game doesn't have a noun after it. (Ie. Shes covered in Semi-Clear.) Not Semi-clear cum The image posted is just one example.
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NPC: Mitzi
"Like you get so good at being a turned-on piece [of] fuck-meat that you're better at it than anybody else."
Problem: Missing the word "of"
NPC: Mitzi
"Her lips shine invitingly as she tosses the drug applicator over [her] shoulder. "But Mitzi's already a dumb, leaky bimbo!"
Problem: Missing word "her".
NPC: Ari - Love Stars
Scene by: Fr0sty
"Where to start... Well I'm Ari, obviously, and I'm also Green-Star in the Love Starz, also obviously." She scratches her chin, her tail flicking being her as she thinks. "I also live here, again obvious, I know."
Problem: i think "being" is meant to be "behind"
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Poe A: The masquerade
NPC: Holiday - Black Cat
Scene by: Adjatha
"The crate containing the black cat cases has [been] pried open, but none of the contents seem to have been disturbed."
Problem: Missing word. Add "been"
Poe A: Black Cat Cont.
"Her shoulder(s) slam back against the wall and she opens her mouth in an 'O' of surprise as you mercilessly fuck her tender cleavage."
Problem: "shoulder" needs to be a plural. +1 "s"
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NPC: Jade - Dumpling Scene
Scene by: Altair Hayes
"You walk into Fur Effect, only to find the whole place empty save for a one of Jade's legs, which promptly disappears into the employee room, chased by tittering laughter."
Problem: got an extra "a" in there. Should probably remove it.
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NPC: Vaande
Scene by: Zeikfried
"Her thighs are your next target in your impatient sojourn to her pussy, quivering under the rape of your lips."
Notice: this one isn't a typo more of a quarry.
Im not sure if "rape" was the intended word but the scene plays as one of consensual interaction, rape usually implies non-consensual. For the sake of consistency shouldn't a different word be used?
It dosent really matter to me, I just wanted to bring it to your attention.
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NPC: Carrie - Male Milker - overload.
"Streams of semi-clear spray out from the tiny pinprick holes, rapidly increasing in size."
Notice: im not sure if this one is actually a typo considering it from a descriptor tag.
But if the PC has Gabliani Cum, Its Descriptor is Semi- transparent/clear and in several scenes across the game doesn't have a noun after it. (Ie. Shes covered in Semi-Clear.) Not Semi-clear cum The image posted is just one example.
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NPC: Mitzi
"Like you get so good at being a turned-on piece [of] fuck-meat that you're better at it than anybody else."
Problem: Missing the word "of"
NPC: Mitzi
"Her lips shine invitingly as she tosses the drug applicator over [her] shoulder. "But Mitzi's already a dumb, leaky bimbo!"
Problem: Missing word "her".