Just a couple minor typos in the Red and Gold Myr Deserter female loss scenes.
SCENE: Gold Myr Deserter female loss scene.
...Grinding in your shared spasmic throes, you both twitch and moan. As you cling to her legs, they cling to your cheeks, both of you clutching each other as you cumlong and hard.
Solution: a space is needed between "cum" and "long" in the last sentence.
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SCENE: Red Myr Deserter Female loss scene.
...As she stirs the Private around inside of your animalistic vagina and strains it against your slippery walls, your world becomes searing white. You shake spastically and let out a loud, howling crysquirting your warm, slick girl-spunk all over her hand.
Solution: a space and comma are needed in-between "cry" and "squirting" in the last sentence.
Screenshots provided.
SCENE: Gold Myr Deserter female loss scene.
...Grinding in your shared spasmic throes, you both twitch and moan. As you cling to her legs, they cling to your cheeks, both of you clutching each other as you cumlong and hard.
Solution: a space is needed between "cum" and "long" in the last sentence.
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SCENE: Red Myr Deserter Female loss scene.
...As she stirs the Private around inside of your animalistic vagina and strains it against your slippery walls, your world becomes searing white. You shake spastically and let out a loud, howling crysquirting your warm, slick girl-spunk all over her hand.
Solution: a space and comma are needed in-between "cry" and "squirting" in the last sentence.
Screenshots provided.
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