As in title I think there is mixed perspective in this scene from the typical 2nd person to 1st.
Problematic sentence: "Control of your body is instantaneously wrested from my mind as you grit my teeth hard, a loud moan escaping as you climax and your hips hit hers." Both my should be your.
Sorry if reposted normally I don't post old content bugs unless I'm bumping my own report ;P
Problematic sentence: "Control of your body is instantaneously wrested from my mind as you grit my teeth hard, a loud moan escaping as you climax and your hips hit hers." Both my should be your.
Sorry if reposted normally I don't post old content bugs unless I'm bumping my own report ;P