[0.8.20] Meridyx Typos

[Ace Hangman]

Meridyx > Combat (Victory) > Sex > Full Nelson

1. Looks like 'down' doesn't fit here. Unless it's 'move your hands down to her shoulders'.



2. Looks like 'her' doesn't fit here. Unless this is the start of a parser.



3. Remove an extra 'out'.



Sex > Let Her Lead

4. Extra space here. Probably from a knot parser.



Talk > Invite

5. Add a space before name parser.



Enter Camp > Followers > Meridyx

6. Should this be, 'It shouldn't be hard to use this one.' instead of 'it should be hard'?



7. Should be 'pores' instead of 'pours'.



Enter Camp > Followers > Sex

8. Should be a space here.



Enter Camp > Followers > Sex > Facesitting

9. Should be a space here.



10. Extra period here.

 

[Ace Hangman]

Enter Camp > Followers > Sex > Facesitting (Bad End)

11. Should be 'hand' instead of 'handshake'. 'You shake her hand.' or 'You return her handshake.'



Sex > Oral

12. This scene happens in camp, Champ walks away from camp to call her, so not even in their tent where they might be a camp desk.
Maybe this was intended to be a scene in Wayfort originally and there's a FWCO parser checking for Frost Hound, Wayfort, Camp, or Other or something?



13. Should be a space here between 'cum' and 'in'.
Should be a space at end of sentence.