During and after the second expedition into the Ways with Nina, there are a few mistakes. (I helped Thalia find her remains, in case that makes a difference.)
First image: One too many "in". One of them needs to go.
Second image: That "into" shouldn't be there.
Third image: "ways" isn't capitalized, even though it probably should be.
First image: One too many "in". One of them needs to go.
Second image: That "into" shouldn't be there.
Third image: "ways" isn't capitalized, even though it probably should be.