After taking yet another note about a mistype to report, I thought that had I wanted to contribute effectively, I should've spellcheck en masse. And so I did. As I don't have access to source texts, only the JS bundles in the Steam version, I simply loosed a spellchecker on those. And we haven't come out empty-handed.
Disclaimer, I'm not a native English speaker, and my main point here is to encourage writers to employ a spellchecker before their text gets intermixed with code. Even the best of us ain't immune from mistakes; a single neuron misfiring in one's motion-control circuit may scramble an otherwise perfect English word. I wonder if there is a programmer who's never copy-pasted a line to form a block of similar expressions and forgot to change a sign or rename a variable.
So. I've filtered out obvious false hits, as well as some obviously (to me) minor/debatable hits. Consider me as a basic AI assistant on top of a generic spellchecker. Among my findings are not only undoubtful mistype reports, but also more like suggestions for you to double-check the wording in certain places. Results are grouped per JS file; of course this may be not too informative, but a CoC2 programmer surely will be able to trace back the fragments to the sources. "SC" means "spellchecker" (if it's the only remark, then I have no judgement on the issue personally), "xN" means "N occurences in the file", like "x2", "x3", etc. The general template is
Content_Followers:
Content_FireTemple:
Content_DreamPalace:
Content_Starhome:
Content_Other:
Content_DragonLair:
Content_HornetHive:
Now, I've sorted the files ascending by size, and there've been only 7 here. The question is, should I cease or go on? Is the format sufficiently informative? I've been struggling with shitty internet connection where I have most resources to do the job, so I wonder if I'm welcomed to struggle more, or my efforts are considered.. misapplied. Please tell :)
Disclaimer, I'm not a native English speaker, and my main point here is to encourage writers to employ a spellchecker before their text gets intermixed with code. Even the best of us ain't immune from mistakes; a single neuron misfiring in one's motion-control circuit may scramble an otherwise perfect English word. I wonder if there is a programmer who's never copy-pasted a line to form a block of similar expressions and forgot to change a sign or rename a variable.
So. I've filtered out obvious false hits, as well as some obviously (to me) minor/debatable hits. Consider me as a basic AI assistant on top of a generic spellchecker. Among my findings are not only undoubtful mistype reports, but also more like suggestions for you to double-check the wording in certain places. Results are grouped per JS file; of course this may be not too informative, but a CoC2 programmer surely will be able to trace back the fragments to the sources. "SC" means "spellchecker" (if it's the only remark, then I have no judgement on the issue personally), "xN" means "N occurences in the file", like "x2", "x3", etc. The general template is
"an optional context fragment": "replace what" → "with what" (optional comment);
. Now take a look.Content_Followers:
- "a wreathe of flowers" → "a wreath of flowers" (wreathe seems to be a verb, the noun = wreath);
- "Every hard, wet meeting of your lips and the ring only serve to further reinforce the feeling": "only serve" → "only serves" ("every …" is singular);
- "I was thinking your collar" → "I was thinking about your collar";
- "You shuffle forward to take ahold of her hips": "ahold" → "a hold"?;
Content_FireTemple:
- "orgams" → "orgasm";
- "ot the" → "to the";
- "evne" → "even";
- "overful" → "overfull" (x2);
- "upabove" → "up above"?;
- "does does" → "does"?;
- "icon of of" → "icon of";
- "very will" → "very well" (x2);
- "petitie" → "petite";
- "to effusively" → "so effusively";
Content_DreamPalace:
- "The pitch of her moans become a low and sultry purr": "become" → "becomes";
- "pheremonal" → "pheromonal";
- "crys of ecstasy": "crys" → "cries";
- "the feeling of being stretching to your limit" (SC suggests "stretched");
- "trembling with the pleasure" (SC sees "the" unwanted);
- "cumall down her chin": "cumall" → "cum all";
- "fhucking" (well, probably intended);
- "in a summer's day" → "on a summer's day" (SC);
Content_Starhome:
- "The girls turn their attention on you afterwards": "on you" → "to you";
- "ohgods" → "oh gods" (probably intended);
- "helping the high shaman eak out the remainder of a messy series of ropes": (x2) SC is unsure about "eak", and so am I;
- "erogonous" → "erogenous" (2x);
- "even as your crotched is bathed in her sticky-sweet girlcum": "crotched" → "crotch";
- "and the insistent hammering of your heart come crashing": "come" → "comes";
- "Your fingers dances their way to her depths": "dances" → "dance" (or one fingers, you decide);
Content_Other:
- "she gets to all fours and pads over to you": "to all" → "on all";
- "with that feels like distilled eroticism": "with that" → "with what";
- "conscecrated" → "consecrated";
- "as she plys them up and down your rod": "plys" → "plies";
- "we both agreed to improving it": "improving" → "improve";
Content_DragonLair:
- "a dewey pink pussy": "dewey" → "dewy";
- "Plump lips kiss nosily": "nosily" → "noisily";
- "a few foot of tail will have that effect": "foot" → "feet";
- there are 16 occurences of "dragoness\'s" and one "dragoness\'" w/o the trailing "s", you decide which form should be changed to the other for consistency;
- "Evelyn slowly conquers you body and soul": "you" → "your";
- "you\'re taken wholly offguard": "offguard" → "off guard";
Content_HornetHive:
- "Your grit your own teeth": "Your grit" → "You grit";
- "and beads of the sweet nectar dribbles from them": "dribbles" → "dribble" (x2);
- "You’ve had opportunity" → "You’ve had the opportunity";
- "from which her ovipositor jutts": "jutts" → "juts";
- "with far more enthusiasm before": "before" → "than before";
- "It’s only raw force of sexual desire": "raw" → "the raw";
- "moans are soon answered from an orgasmic cry from the queen": "answered from" → "answered by";
- "her body starts jostling and shaking like she were about to explode": "she were" → "she was" (or maybe "is");
- "wet <i>thud</i> of water hit the ground": "hit" → "hitting";
- "until she has every last drop you can give her is in her mouth": "is in" → "in" (or remove "she has");
- "before so clamps her lips around you again": "so" → "she";
- "She started off tight as could be": "tight" → "as tight";
- "while lips kiss your tummy with reverance": "reverance" → "reverence";
- "is going to be cause for discomfort later" → "is going to cause discomfort later" (or maybe "to be a cause of discomfort");
- "the sleepy looks on the faces": "the" → "their";
- "posessively" → "possessively";
- "noise noisy slurping" (uh, you decide whether this passes);
- "she grips you for fear life": "fear" → "dear"? (SC wants "fear of life);
- "with dripping finers": "finers" → "fingers";
- "Its passes through you": "Its" → "It";
- "and although you cant see why": "cant" → "can\'t";
- "initiatially" → "initially";
- "teasing your clut" (SC; I place my bet on "clut" being "clit" in disguise);
- "a ovipositor-filled cunt": "a" → "an";
- "One of your legs are dropped to the floor": "are" → "is";
- "and one of her hands too join in": "join" → "joins";
- "Nyzerrah and Azyrran’s attentions": "attentions" → "attention";
- "The smell of lillies": "lillies" → "lilies";
Now, I've sorted the files ascending by size, and there've been only 7 here. The question is, should I cease or go on? Is the format sufficiently informative? I've been struggling with shitty internet connection where I have most resources to do the job, so I wonder if I'm welcomed to struggle more, or my efforts are considered.. misapplied. Please tell :)