[0.7.9] Various typos + Astraea's one night stand

[teawolf]

When ambushed by the harpies in the Wayfort, italics are missing on "Right there, Champ!":


When getting the leash fem!Keros dream in the Den, should be "suckling:"


When visiting the hairdressers in Hawkethorne and getting your hair done, comma after "lips" should be a period, and "you" should be capitalized:


Same scene, should be "bangles:"


Same scene, period after "snip" should go inside the quotation marks:


When meeting Astarea in the Frost Hound, cut "had" before "accomplished," since the pluperfect is unnecessary:


Same scene, "had" should be "have:"


Next page, cut "had" (not pluperfect):

 

[teawolf]

Same scene, cut "had:"


Same scene, cut "had:"


Next page, "are" should be "is:"


I think "to" here should be "the:"


"Astraea was" should be "Astraea is:"


"Wanted" should be "want:"


Should be "Frost Hound:"


Period should go inside both sets of quotation marks after "celebrate:"

 

[teawolf]

After selecting the bottoming option, period after "get" should go inside the quotation marks:


"Sink" here should be "sinking:"


In standing full nelson, the second "her" should be "you," I think:


Thanks!

 

[zagzig]

Should be sorted, cheers.