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[0.7.6] Wayfort typos
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<blockquote data-quote="Ace Hangman" data-source="post: 439234" data-attributes="member: 40656"><p><strong>Meeting Farrah after the Renovations are completed (Coming out of the Ways Between)</strong></p><p></p><p>1. 'Ways Between' should be capitalized.</p><p>[ATTACH]35308[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>2. Looks like this an incomplete sentence. Should end it with something about Farrah, like '... you're brought short by a [waiting shadow/lurking figure/sapphire woman/familar blue woman/etc.]</p><p>[ATTACH]35309[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>3. Should be 'from' instead of 'form'.</p><p>[ATTACH]35310[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>4. Should delete 'between ways'. It doesn't make sense 'you step down from the statue between ways,' Can just be 'statue.' =</p><p>[ATTACH]35311[/ATTACH]</p><p></p><p>5. While her lips could be a very, very dark blue, I think they're actually black. Or 'onyx' or 'obsidian'.</p><p>[ATTACH]35312[/ATTACH]</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Ace Hangman, post: 439234, member: 40656"] [B]Meeting Farrah after the Renovations are completed (Coming out of the Ways Between)[/B] 1. 'Ways Between' should be capitalized. [ATTACH]35308[/ATTACH] 2. Looks like this an incomplete sentence. Should end it with something about Farrah, like '... you're brought short by a [waiting shadow/lurking figure/sapphire woman/familar blue woman/etc.] [ATTACH]35309[/ATTACH] 3. Should be 'from' instead of 'form'. [ATTACH]35310[/ATTACH] 4. Should delete 'between ways'. It doesn't make sense 'you step down from the statue between ways,' Can just be 'statue.' = [ATTACH]35311[/ATTACH] 5. While her lips could be a very, very dark blue, I think they're actually black. Or 'onyx' or 'obsidian'. [ATTACH]35312[/ATTACH] [/QUOTE]
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